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Could It Be You

mind your submissions peruse haiga haiku ten wrong could it be you

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Fj Thomas

Date: 5/9/2018 6:16:00 PM

Sounds like your contest is off to the same start my last one was Mick. I hope it ends better than mine!

Fj Thomas
Date: 5/9/2018 7:13:00 PM

Ummm oookay. I feel like I'm reading text messages my daughters send lol!

Mick Talbot
Date: 5/9/2018 6:43:00 PM

Up 2 15 now, not d8ed, wrongly title, off theme, capital letters, out of d8, punctuation. Haven't done a syllable check. I no when I nter n e contest I read their rules, of course, I make mistake, but, all of the above have been given a chance 2 edit theirs out, they obviously didn't read the ful remit. W8ting on 2 more & if they r fine I will have 35 shortlisted, love it! Soz x eded 400 chars.

Winged Warrior

Date: 5/8/2018 8:30:00 AM

Nice my friend...love and light...^WW^

Mick Talbot
Date: 5/8/2018 8:43:00 AM

Thanks <-WW->, do you, or might you know who wrote this? trapped fish swim about........ behind our clear walls of glass....... do seas haunt their dreams?.......... It's going to be number 11 if they don't drop the ? Hint