'cougar Effect'

C aution to the wind 
O  lder me and a younger you 
U ndeniable attraction 
G rasping the chance to explore 
A nd never thinking about 
R egrets or the age gap 

E njoying all the dubious 
F aces probably wondering 
F or the life of them, what does he see in her?
E specially when we
C uddle and you kiss me in public
T angible expression of our love


Contest Name : Cougar Effect
Name : Wilma N. Neels

130620111350

6th Place
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Brown Avatar
July 5, 2011 at 4:29 AM
Congratulations on your win Wilma in Dr. Ram Mehta's "Cougar Effect" contest. Love, Carol
Dietrich Avatar
July 4, 2011 at 11:59 AM
I still remember this one. I really enjoyed it the first time too. Congrats on your win, WIlma.
Horne Avatar
July 3, 2011 at 12:55 PM
I can't believe how many contest results I've missed - many congrats on all your recent wins, Wilma : )
George   Avatar
July 3, 2011 at 4:24 AM
Awesome Acrostic, Wilma. Many congrats on your SUPERWIN. Lainie
Johnson Avatar
July 3, 2011 at 2:20 AM
Hot little number babe, great placing too. well done, xo, Don
Johnson Avatar
July 2, 2011 at 6:58 PM
Congratulations on your great acrostic and win. Love, Joyce
Sweetheart Avatar
July 2, 2011 at 6:24 PM
Congrats Wilma on your dynamic win with this fantastic write my friend.. enjoy as u celebrate a happy 4th ..do u in S.A.? celebrate with us luv..
Mehta Avatar
July 2, 2011 at 4:46 PM
My congratulations on the lovely win in my contest, Wilma
Harms Avatar
June 21, 2011 at 5:52 PM
age is just a number the truth is in the eyes
Foulk Avatar
June 15, 2011 at 8:04 PM
a very creative Acrostic piece of poetry, enjoyed it. thank you for commenting on Warm Breezes.
Devonshire Avatar
June 15, 2011 at 12:49 PM
Young women with older men raise fewer eyebrows than young men with older women, Wilma. No one cared that my late husband was 19 years older than I. But if I were to date a guy 19 years younger, I'd be drawing a lot of criticism. The truth is couples in love don't think about "age," only the way they feel. Excellent entry for Dr. Ram's contest, dear. Winning wishes headed your way. Love, Carolyn
Poet Avatar
June 15, 2011 at 11:45 AM
This is a brilliant write from you Wilma...best wishes..
A   Avatar
June 14, 2011 at 5:06 AM
oh! my what an effect... brillant entry... cuddling... i got to get me a male cougar.. good luck Wilma,,, and good morning,..p.d,
Dietrich Avatar
June 13, 2011 at 11:05 PM
very cute idea doing it acrostically, Wilma, I still have no idea how I can do this one! I enjoyed reading this one tonight. I think also I am going to go off now. Maybe something is wrong with my computer but I can't stand how slowly this is going! LUv, andrea
Mehta Avatar
June 13, 2011 at 6:12 PM
Thanks for the entry, Wilma
Johnson Avatar
June 13, 2011 at 4:14 PM
Very cute affair, the heart strings tear, great verse here i see. well done babe, xo, Don
Falotico Avatar
June 13, 2011 at 2:02 PM
Well well well my Wilma, now this made me smile and a few other things lol.... This write is the contest!!!!! Beautiful work luv....love Michael
Peranteau Avatar
June 13, 2011 at 11:26 AM
Yep ! I'm sweat'n here dear poet ! *smiles* Great entry Wilma ! Have wonderful week my friend ! Much(young) love !, james
Sweetheart Avatar
June 13, 2011 at 8:04 AM
a super sized piece of cougar effect Wilma.. and a great form to use to express luv.. good luck in this fascinating theme contest.. certainly top notch my friend..luv..
Onclaud Avatar
June 13, 2011 at 8:04 AM
oh yeah, ageless kind of romance! superbly done with winning streaks, my wilms... go! :) huggs, nette
Susan Avatar
June 13, 2011 at 7:33 AM
a nice write! Perfect for the contest! Good luck!
Hendricks Avatar
June 13, 2011 at 6:58 AM
Bugger the caution. Go, Wilma!!! I see a winner in here for Dr Ram's contest. Stylish poetry, my friend. Best of luck to you. :-) // (As an aside, my Captcha characters read "2b54". Spot-on. lol).
Kendrick Avatar
June 13, 2011 at 5:34 AM
Good one..Enjoyed reading this morn..Good luck in the contest...Reads like winners' circle to me..Sara
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