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Cotton Candy

What I sometimes see before sunset or sunrise, is one of the most beautiful things before my eyes. A reddish sky through branches of the chestnut tree, permeating the heavens is what I can see. The pink hues remind me of cotton candy. That is my childhood treat so sweet and sticky. Cherished times in earlier days I reminisce. Few moments of my past are as sweet as this. I devoured the treat at ballgames and carnivals too. The candy was spun in pink, and sometimes blue. I wondered if pink was for girls and blue for boys. Both colors and flavors brought me many joys.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 2/11/2011 7:21:00 AM
Amazing title to compliment your brilliant words Robert my friend... a lovely picture painted with your lines my friend..with luv..
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Date: 2/11/2011 5:51:00 AM
nice children gem
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Date: 2/10/2011 11:32:00 PM
what a delightful picture of child sweets and sunsets! REally enjoyable. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 2/10/2011 8:59:00 PM
An enchanting write Robert. You've made me smile on this drab day.
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