Cotton Candy

Joy is a taste that melts in my mouth
That taste so good I want to shout
It's so soft and colorfully bleeds
Sweet sugary stuff upon my teeth

Matters not how young you are
This candy cloud will win your heart
Even if you are toothless or have all your teeth
You will enjoy cotton candy.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Kingston Avatar
March 7, 2023 at 1:33 PM
YUMMY, you describe it so well. I used to allow myself some at the yearly Vermont State Fair. Hey, you can always brush your teeth after right?! Cute, cute, cute!
Jones Avatar
March 9, 2023 at 8:45 PM
Marikate we only live once so enjoy! Thanks for reading!
Buehler Avatar
June 17, 2022 at 7:45 PM
Very pleasing images of a delectable treat. Lovely! Evelyn
Jones Avatar
June 17, 2022 at 8:11 PM
Thanks Evelyn!
M  Avatar
June 16, 2022 at 5:06 AM
Really sweet lighthearted poem Karen….enjoyed….. Debx
Jones Avatar
June 16, 2022 at 1:44 PM
Thank you Deb!
Canerdy Avatar
June 14, 2022 at 9:16 AM
Descriptive, deightful poem, Karen. Janice
Jones Avatar
June 14, 2022 at 9:18 AM
Thanks Janice!
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