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Cotton Candy

Joy is a taste that melts in my mouth That taste so good I want to shout It's so soft and colorfully bleeds Sweet sugary stuff upon my teeth Matters not how young you are This candy cloud will win your heart Even if you are toothless or have all your teeth You will enjoy cotton candy.

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Date: 3/7/2023 1:33:00 PM
YUMMY, you describe it so well. I used to allow myself some at the yearly Vermont State Fair. Hey, you can always brush your teeth after right?! Cute, cute, cute!
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Karen Jones
Date: 3/9/2023 8:45:00 PM
Marikate we only live once so enjoy! Thanks for reading!
Date: 6/17/2022 7:45:00 PM
Very pleasing images of a delectable treat. Lovely! Evelyn
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Karen Jones
Date: 6/17/2022 8:11:00 PM
Thanks Evelyn!
Date: 6/16/2022 5:06:00 AM
Really sweet lighthearted poem Karen….enjoyed….. Debx
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Karen Jones
Date: 6/16/2022 1:44:00 PM
Thank you Deb!
Date: 6/14/2022 9:16:00 AM
Descriptive, deightful poem, Karen. Janice
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Karen Jones
Date: 6/14/2022 9:18:00 AM
Thanks Janice!

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