Cosmos Leisure

Written: November 15, 2023
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Some seek leisure in the pristine wilderness
The solitary coast is the site of separateness
Each one is barred from harboring bitterness
The ocean thundering, roaring in its utterness
Nature fascinates me beyond my smallness
Never before impeded in the path of emptiness
From lackluster scarcity and austere emptiness
An itch for oneness in the cosmos of loneliness
We wait idly for the angel's plea for tenderness.

analogyappreciationintrospectionnaturemonorhyme

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Vijay Pandit

November 16, 2023 at 5:54 AM

A thoughtful commentary, my friend. Much relief and inspiration you convey--exiting emptiness.

Ink Empress

November 15, 2023 at 10:19 PM

This is so profound and I absolutely love your rhymes here creating such a captivating cadence: I agree with so many lines written in such a philosophical and deep manner , and how soul hitting is the line “ The ocean thundering, roaring in its utterness“ very descriptive line that is and very creative. “ An itch for oneness in the cosmos of loneliness“ one can only hope for that. And wish. “ Nature fascinates me beyond my smallness“ same here nature has a way of healing us when all is but dark

Bill Baker

November 15, 2023 at 8:37 PM

Your Monorhyme was well written and conveys that struggles through loneliness and the feelings of being empty, Sotto. Good poetry, sad circumstances. A poet friend in Texas, Bill