Cosmos

We are finite beings in an infinite space;
We are thrown in at the start,
Pushed into the unknowable depth 
Of the darkest waters, without warning.

Sometimes we take pause,
Allow ourselves to admire 
The things created for us,
Things we created for ourselves.

The ineffable beauty of the cosmos
Can be found in the melody
Of your favourite song
Swirling on repeat through your mind.

It can be found in the laughter of friends
Bound by the trauma of ageing together,
Getting older and cackling
In the face of the inevitable.

Sometimes it is shared in a gaze
Between lovers, when pupils, thoughts
And lips collide in mutual admiration
Of each other’s spiritual and corporeal form.

Other times we mark it in ceremonies;
Graduating with that desired 2:1
And £60,00 in governmental debt,
The world more open than ever before,

Or the ritual of shrouding in black,
Sending those we love
In Charon’s graceful embrace as dust,
Back to where we came from.

We clock in to our allocated slot,
Repeat tasks of beautiful mundanity,
Surround ourselves with little treasures,
And at the end of it all, clock out,
To be set free amongst the stars.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023



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Date: 9/11/2023 6:17:00 AM
I absolutely love the cadence of this poem, and the depth of every line and how you’ve phrased your thoughts in such sheer poetic eloquence. “ ineffable” a word i love i dnt see many use but you’ve used it so very well: and so many more lines i found so profound: ah to be set free amongst stars. Pleasure reading you
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Han Marlo
Date: 9/18/2023 10:48:00 AM
Thank you so much! I'm a sponge when it comes to unusual words, I collect them from all the things I read and watch and then make excuses to use them :) Ineffable is a new favourite!
Date: 9/10/2023 12:00:00 PM
Glad I saw this today Han. You are an outstanding poet
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Han Marlo
Date: 9/18/2023 10:47:00 AM
That's ever so kind of you, thank you Tom :D
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Tom Woody
Date: 9/10/2023 12:01:00 PM
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