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Cosmic Musings

From microscopic neutrons to the mighty Milky Way The universe reveals its sundry span. Magnetic fields preserve a perfect balance night and day Facilitating life on earth for man. Our life-sustaining earth parades a stunning rich supply Of colours, textures, symmetry and art, And as the master clock ticks off the seasons passing by, It charts the cycle of each beating heart. The awesomeness of life should make us pause; Can random forces really be the cause? Date:03.07.19 Contest:The universe poetry contest Sponsor:Nina Parmenter

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/23/2023 7:54:00 AM

Congratulations on this winning work in Brian's contest. Way to go. Thanks for sharing. Sara

Christuraj Alex

Date: 2/22/2023 3:21:00 AM

"The awesomeness of life should make us pause" - A very beautiful poem. Congratulations!

John Watt

Date: 10/10/2020 4:54:00 PM

Enjoyed revisiting this wonderful write, Wendy. Congratulations today and best wishes always ~ John

Susan Ashley

Date: 10/10/2020 12:59:00 PM

It is a pleasure to return to re-read this poetic gem, Wendy. Congratulations for your wonderful win.. ~Susan

John Watt

Date: 3/28/2020 12:24:00 PM

The fact that we can even pose the final question and muse on it points to an intelligent Creator, Wendy, not to mention all the perfect conditions that exist here on earth for life to thrive. I so enjoy your careful observation of metre and rhyme, but even more the philosophical contemplation and our shared belief in how that last question is answered. Congrats on this win! John

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 7/8/2019 12:35:00 PM

Wonderful! Every line, with the last one expertly crafted, to linger :) Congratulations for your win! xomo

Wendy Watson
Date: 7/26/2019 1:52:00 PM

What a lovely comment.Thank you so much,Maureen.

Brenda Chiri

Date: 7/8/2019 2:34:00 AM

Wendy sonderful won! Congrats!;)

Wendy Watson
Date: 7/26/2019 1:51:00 PM

I imagine there's a typo here but what a great word that would be - 'sonderful!' Thanks,Brenda.

Beata Agustin

Date: 7/8/2019 12:14:00 AM

"Can random forces really be the cause?" Great concluding line!!! Congrats. God bless you.

Wendy Watson
Date: 7/26/2019 1:50:00 PM

I think we would both agree to reply in the negative,Beata!

Susan Ashley

Date: 7/7/2019 7:34:00 PM

Your cosmic musings are beautiful, Wendy. Your last line is an exquisite finale to a wondrous and thoughtful piece. Congratulations on your wonderful win. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Wendy Watson
Date: 7/26/2019 1:49:00 PM

That's very kind of you,Susan. Thank you so much for taking the time to read and comment.

P.S. Awtry

Date: 7/7/2019 5:19:00 PM

Nicely done Wendy! Perfect title and excellent point! Congratulations!

Wendy Watson
Date: 7/26/2019 1:49:00 PM

Thank you so much,P.S.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 7/7/2019 4:48:00 PM

Love the question in the last line! Congrats on your win in Nina's contest, Wendy. ~ gw

Wendy Watson
Date: 7/26/2019 1:49:00 PM

Thank you,Gershon. I could not fail but to answer in the negative!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/7/2019 3:37:00 PM

great job, WEndy. Congrats for your win.

Wendy Watson
Date: 7/26/2019 1:48:00 PM

Thank you,Andrea. I do wish I'd been encouraged to expand my knowledge in this area.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 7/7/2019 11:45:00 AM

Wonderfully written! For me, when I step out my door and think about where I am and how this heavy earth is floating in space, there is no doubt that God exists!

Wendy Watson
Date: 7/7/2019 1:47:00 PM

I totally agree,Kim. Thank you so much for your kind comments.

Janice Canerdy

Date: 7/7/2019 10:17:00 AM

CONGRATULATIONS on your well-deserved win, Wendy! I REALLY like this one. Janice

Wendy Watson
Date: 7/7/2019 1:45:00 PM

Thank you so much, Janice. Wasn't this difficult in so few lines?