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The mesmerizing view of northern lights, Finally forms into a cosmic image, I see my love descending from the heavens, attired in vivid colors of the cosmic waves of rays. Is it the soul or a cosmic image of my wandering love? I can’t differentiate, till I find myself lying in a flowering grass pad, With our bodies united and souls intertwined, She points to the moon, where her beauty lies. In the starry skies, the moon shining bright, She asks who is prettier, moon or me. The only answer I have from my heart, When I see you, I forget about the moon. In the dawn early rays from the sun, She does not want to go, she is draped in red, Soon the sun will get brighter, her aura will disappear, She will be gone for a while, but I will be waiting forever.

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Date: 12/1/2024 8:57:00 PM
What a deep romantic musing. I am sure your lonely days are filled with thoughts of your dear one who departed from you and lives eons of light years away! Yet you eternally wait for her.
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Date: 12/1/2024 1:11:00 PM
- A fine love story under the northern lights ... the northern lights are one of the most mysterious and impressive natural phenomena that exist, Jay :) - hugs
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