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Cosmic Illusion

everpresent sun appearing to move with time across the heavens

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M. L. Kiser

Date: 5/30/2022 2:09:00 PM

It travels all day long, this cosmic being. Enjoyed.

P.M. Richter
Date: 6/5/2022 11:28:00 AM

Thanks ML ~

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/22/2019 5:45:00 PM

Love this!

P.M. Richter
Date: 10/22/2019 9:45:00 PM

Thank you Andrea :)

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 9/12/2019 8:09:00 AM

The universe doesn’t revolve around us? Perspective is an interesting thing. I enjoyed your haiku.

P.M. Richter
Date: 9/12/2019 9:05:00 AM

I agree - thanks Richard ;)

Alkas Poetry

Date: 8/24/2019 7:37:00 AM

SUN TIME HEAVEN COSMO PERFECT ALGORITHM CREATED BY THE BIGGEST SALUTE ALKAS

P.M. Richter
Date: 8/27/2019 3:29:00 PM

Thank you Alkas

J.W. Earnings

Date: 8/2/2019 6:29:00 AM

Beautifully-made poem.

P.M. Richter
Date: 8/2/2019 9:30:00 AM

You are very kind. Thank you!

Jan Allison

Date: 6/1/2019 4:56:00 AM

lovely haiku PM:-) hugs Jan xx

P.M. Richter
Date: 6/1/2019 8:31:00 AM

Thanks Jan :)