Cosmic Dance

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gliding sliding meandering traveling in stride skating graceful in mid air worlds engage as whirlwinds their twirling churn in their incessant dance galaxies waltz around while unrehearsed a minuet of stars bounce where winds may blow AP: 3rd place 2022 Submitted on May 1, 2021 for contest ALL YOURS (MAY 3) sponsored by BRIAN STRAND - RANKED 1ST Originally posted on April 23, 2021 (revamped from 2019 version: On A Collision Course)

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Funom Makama

Date: 4/27/2021 7:04:00 PM

Beautifully written with so much grace. Your lines are thick with craft and fascination. Great work.

Line Gauthier
Date: 4/27/2021 7:40:00 PM

Thanks for your lovely comment, Funom ~

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 4/25/2021 8:35:00 AM

A galactic stage performance - so beautiful Line, The title you cose for your poem, says it all. I wonder if the Astronauts from the various continents who have all met at the space station somewhere in space, realize how lucky they are to be making history and to be witness to this this era now beginning. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Line Gauthier
Date: 4/25/2021 9:04:00 PM

I think they do ~ thanks, Jennifer

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 4/24/2021 5:04:00 AM

I love star gazing Line. Your poem took me on a journey to the cosmos. Lovely! Have a great weekend. Blessings xxoo

Line Gauthier
Date: 4/24/2021 9:07:00 PM

Thank you so much, Connie. Most appreciated ~

Susan Woodrow

Date: 4/23/2021 8:35:00 AM

this was lovely and reads smooth like a perfect dance :)

Line Gauthier
Date: 4/23/2021 9:07:00 PM

Thanks, Susan ~ most appreciated