Cosmic Dance

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gliding sliding meandering
traveling in stride
skating graceful in mid air

worlds engage as whirlwinds
their twirling churn 
in their incessant dance

galaxies waltz around while
unrehearsed a minuet of stars
bounce where winds may blow



AP: 3rd place 2022

Submitted on May 1, 2021 for contest ALL YOURS (MAY 3) sponsored by BRIAN STRAND  -  RANKED 1ST 

Posted on April 23, 2021

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Funom Makama

Date: 4/27/2021 7:04:00 PM

Beautifully written with so much grace. Your lines are thick with craft and fascination. Great work.

Line Gauthier
Date: 4/27/2021 7:40:00 PM

Thanks for your lovely comment, Funom ~

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 4/25/2021 8:35:00 AM

A galactic stage performance - so beautiful Line, The title you cose for your poem, says it all. I wonder if the Astronauts from the various continents who have all met at the space station somewhere in space, realize how lucky they are to be making history and to be witness to this this era now beginning. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Line Gauthier
Date: 4/25/2021 9:04:00 PM

I think they do ~ thanks, Jennifer

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 4/24/2021 5:04:00 AM

I love star gazing Line. Your poem took me on a journey to the cosmos. Lovely! Have a great weekend. Blessings xxoo

Line Gauthier
Date: 4/24/2021 9:07:00 PM

Thank you so much, Connie. Most appreciated ~

Susan Woodrow

Date: 4/23/2021 8:35:00 AM

this was lovely and reads smooth like a perfect dance :)

Line Gauthier
Date: 4/23/2021 9:07:00 PM

Thanks, Susan ~ most appreciated