Line Gauthier Poet Free verse

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Cosmic Dance

gliding sliding meandering
traveling in stride
skating graceful in mid air

worlds engage as whirlwinds
their twirling churn 
in their incessant dance

galaxies waltz around while
unrehearsed a minuet of stars
bounce where winds may blow



AP: 3rd place 2022, Honorable Mention 2025

Submitted on May 1, 2021 for contest ALL YOURS (MAY 3) sponsored by BRIAN STRAND  -  RANKED 1ST

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Funom Makama April 27, 2021 at 7:04 PM Beautifully written with so much grace. Your lines are thick with craft and fascination. Great work. Line Gauthier April 27, 2021 at 7:40 PM Thanks for your lovely comment, Funom ~

Jennifer Proxenos April 25, 2021 at 8:35 AM A galactic stage performance - so beautiful Line, The title you cose for your poem, says it all. I wonder if the Astronauts from the various continents who have all met at the space station somewhere in space, realize how lucky they are to be making history and to be witness to this this era now beginning. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer. Line Gauthier April 25, 2021 at 9:04 PM I think they do ~ thanks, Jennifer

Connie Marcum Wong April 24, 2021 at 5:04 AM I love star gazing Line. Your poem took me on a journey to the cosmos. Lovely! Have a great weekend. Blessings xxoo Line Gauthier April 24, 2021 at 9:07 PM Thank you so much, Connie. Most appreciated ~

Susan Woodrow April 23, 2021 at 8:35 AM this was lovely and reads smooth like a perfect dance :) Line Gauthier April 23, 2021 at 9:07 PM Thanks, Susan ~ most appreciated