Cosmic Crisp

Colors loosen

Contours wander

World tilts

Just a little

As if trying to hear

Its own heartbeat
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Etgen-Baker Avatar
April 10, 2026 at 3:40 PM
how cosmic and creative! :-) faving
Delegans Avatar
April 11, 2026 at 9:58 AM
Honored and always humbled when someone favs, especially from a poet such as yourself. Thank you for the kind words and encouragement, Sara.
Springs Avatar
April 10, 2026 at 12:46 AM
a shuddery universe - or are WE trying to hear it's heartbeat?
Delegans Avatar
April 11, 2026 at 9:57 AM
Maybe both??? Thanks for reading and commenting, Ava.
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