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Cosmic Contraption

Once upon a timelessness, a ripple wrinkle, night and day begot. The rest is history.

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Stephen Ripley

Date: 3/12/2025 4:28:00 PM

Revision: Once upon a timelessness, a crinkle, night and day begot, The rest is history.

Stephen Ripley

Date: 3/12/2025 4:26:00 PM

Revision: Once upon a timelessness, a crinkle, night and day begot, The rest is history.

Beata Agustin

Date: 6/4/2024 12:02:00 AM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Darren White

Date: 6/20/2017 12:47:00 AM

Lovely haiku. I enjoyed it. Welcome to PoetrySoup :)

Stephen Ripley
Date: 8/13/2017 11:53:00 AM

Thanks, Darren, I am a beginner here, just in to make a revision. Steve