Coronavirus

You rushed in, a cold dark secret to all
To cover impending doom's quiet voice
And moved like a shadow upon a wall 
With the sweat of death your weapon of choice
The woeful sickness to suffer you bring
To the elderly victim's door, you knock
As the graveyards welcome, the church bells ring
The stench of death's old continuous clock
Wise are those who cleanse labor's hands of you
To wash away fevers of your desire
And overcome your wordless toxic brew
To cool the fatal climate of your fire
Prudent the life made longer from this deed
Embrace the reverence to clean indeed

3/15/20
contest Coronavirus-19
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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De Beaulieu Avatar
May 12, 2020 at 5:40 PM
Hello Frederic Packer, yes hygiene is important. We have to be clean from germs. Enjoy your evening my friend.
Allison Avatar
May 12, 2020 at 2:09 PM
a hard hitting poem Frederic , personal hygiene is so important in dealing with this killer virus. stay safe:-) many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
Watt Avatar
May 12, 2020 at 1:14 PM
Excellently worded letter to the coronavirus. If only it would read and heed. Loved reading it while listening to Exodus, an old favorite. Well done and congratulations, Frederic ~ John
Carber Avatar
May 12, 2020 at 1:00 PM
Well written Frederic--I would have placed it much higher.
Inman Avatar
May 12, 2020 at 12:21 PM
Your unique expression of the character of the virus is well presented in your choice of form. I relate strongly with your style of writing Frederic. Very well done.
Kauffman Avatar
May 12, 2020 at 10:35 AM
Congratulations Frederic on your winning poem with its extended metaphor and vivid imagery - "to cool the fatal climate of your fire," "wordless toxic brew" just a couple of examples. Nicely penned.
Roper Avatar
May 12, 2020 at 9:31 AM
I am so back with a very Big congratulations on your win, Frederic. Hugs Eve
Roper Avatar
March 31, 2020 at 8:23 PM
Well said, Frederic, it is just still spreading like wind is to fire
Rodrigues Avatar
March 15, 2020 at 3:46 PM
So interesting how each poet covers the topic.
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