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Cork In Hand

My drapes are drawn tight, in the morning of our afternoon, after the fall – beyond the light of a silent evening spent. Dusk spits a new shine upon the facets of my mood ring and sunrise alarms me again. Fish hooks evenly lure my smile into place - when bated breaths are baited by an anticipated gentry - and the inverted frown I wear stretches undetected when performing index-fingered handstands for the empty allured. Such a celebration am I. A firecracker when we kiss. "The sun sets in his eyes... succulent, cabbage-red and resplendent…” Clichéd stammering; dulled as you turn your softly curved frame into a prisoner's unresolved sensitivities. Nonetheless...the innocent know - His touch is real. Feathered, soft - even when the entranced cripple is sobbing. Roman candles sparkle within a distant vagabond’s eyes. Starch him! Savor the moment! He'll voluntarily burst forth - and everything you'd want from a strayed waif's aorta will be auctioned back... and eventually sold. Like ruby-hued vegetables. Like drawn drapes. Like morning… when biting your pillow case neatly grinds waking into the laughable... …and a forgotten sunrise toasts the unremembered misfit as an invisible champagne cork - pops!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 6/5/2012 11:24:00 AM
A belated congratulations on your placement in Nikko's contest John and so wonderful to see you again here at the soup. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/4/2012 11:35:00 AM
Excellent write here John!Congrats on your win!!
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Date: 6/3/2012 2:21:00 AM
John congrats on your win..David
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Date: 6/2/2012 10:45:00 AM
Oh wow! What a pleasant surprise to see you in my winners' list, John :D! Long time no see!! Thank you so much for entering this captivating piece! This truly had such wonderful imagery and emotion, like I was watching everything unfold and you have a lot of memorable lines here as well. Awesome read for me and super congrats :D!
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Date: 4/24/2011 12:58:00 PM
John, ;-) CONGRATULATIONS!! on your poem being featured this week, hope your enjoying your Easter Sunday. Take care and have a nice one,..p.d
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Date: 4/24/2011 11:17:00 AM
Many congrats on your featured piece this week Rgds Janette
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Date: 4/23/2011 12:24:00 PM
How do you do it John? Some people have the gift!
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Date: 4/19/2011 11:16:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week John. I hope PS has taken care of all your problems for you by now. Have a super week. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/19/2011 4:23:00 AM
Wow! A load of emotions in here! Nicely penned. Congratulations on your poem being featured this week, John. Lovingly, Dane Ann
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Date: 4/18/2011 12:52:00 PM
Congratulations on your poem being featured this week, John
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Date: 4/18/2011 11:08:00 AM
Congratulations on having this gem featured. Always such a pleasure to read your work. xoxo
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Date: 1/31/2009 9:08:00 PM
And I am awestruck by you. I read this masterpiece before, but haven't commented upon it yet. I believe you are the most talented poet on this site.:) So original, dynamic, and genius....is your pen. Peace, Sara:)
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