Cork In Hand

My drapes are drawn tight,
in the morning of our afternoon,
after the fall – beyond the light
of a silent evening spent.
Dusk spits a new shine
upon the facets of my mood ring
and sunrise alarms me again.

Fish hooks evenly lure my smile
into place - when bated breaths
are baited by an anticipated gentry -
and the inverted frown I wear 
stretches undetected 
when performing 
index-fingered handstands 
for the empty allured.

Such a celebration am I.
A firecracker when we kiss.
"The sun sets in his eyes...
succulent, cabbage-red and resplendent…”
Clichéd stammering; dulled 
as you turn your softly curved frame 
into a prisoner's unresolved sensitivities.
Nonetheless...the innocent know -

His touch is real. Feathered, soft -
even when the entranced cripple is sobbing. 
Roman candles sparkle 
within a distant vagabond’s eyes.
Starch him!
Savor the moment!
He'll voluntarily burst forth -
and everything you'd want from
a strayed waif's aorta will be 
auctioned back... 
and eventually sold.  
Like ruby-hued vegetables. 
Like drawn drapes.
Like morning…

when biting your pillow case
neatly grinds waking into the laughable...

…and a forgotten sunrise 
 toasts the unremembered misfit 
 as an invisible champagne cork - pops!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008



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Date: 6/5/2012 11:24:00 AM
A belated congratulations on your placement in Nikko's contest John and so wonderful to see you again here at the soup. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/4/2012 11:35:00 AM
Excellent write here John!Congrats on your win!!
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Date: 6/3/2012 2:21:00 AM
John congrats on your win..David
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Date: 6/2/2012 10:45:00 AM
Oh wow! What a pleasant surprise to see you in my winners' list, John :D! Long time no see!! Thank you so much for entering this captivating piece! This truly had such wonderful imagery and emotion, like I was watching everything unfold and you have a lot of memorable lines here as well. Awesome read for me and super congrats :D!
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Date: 4/24/2011 12:58:00 PM
John, ;-) CONGRATULATIONS!! on your poem being featured this week, hope your enjoying your Easter Sunday. Take care and have a nice one,..p.d
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Date: 4/24/2011 11:17:00 AM
Many congrats on your featured piece this week Rgds Janette
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Date: 4/23/2011 12:24:00 PM
How do you do it John? Some people have the gift!
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Date: 4/19/2011 11:16:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week John. I hope PS has taken care of all your problems for you by now. Have a super week. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/19/2011 4:23:00 AM
Wow! A load of emotions in here! Nicely penned. Congratulations on your poem being featured this week, John. Lovingly, Dane Ann
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Date: 4/18/2011 12:52:00 PM
Congratulations on your poem being featured this week, John
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Date: 4/18/2011 11:08:00 AM
Congratulations on having this gem featured. Always such a pleasure to read your work. xoxo
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Date: 1/31/2009 9:08:00 PM
And I am awestruck by you. I read this masterpiece before, but haven't commented upon it yet. I believe you are the most talented poet on this site.:) So original, dynamic, and genius....is your pen. Peace, Sara:)
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