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Core, Volcano Life

In the Earth's core runs molten liquid of fire slowly it will cool Volcano erupts spewing out molten lava hissing and spitting Fertile valleys rest beneath the dry barren slopes life here born by fire

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Richard Lamoureux

Date: 11/8/2013 12:47:00 PM

Same as with Forrest fires, they add to the soil yet we humans go to great efforts to suppress them and as a result we are now seeing super fires. Nature will have it's way.

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 11/6/2013 4:40:00 AM

The harmony of opposites: Symphony of life! Excellent!

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 11/6/2013 5:11:00 AM

Hi Demetrios Ty for your valuable time spent reading my work I am very pleased that you enjoyed this Shadow x smile hug

Donna Jones

Date: 11/5/2013 12:19:00 PM

Perfect Shadow....such an outstanding write today...

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 11/5/2013 3:14:00 PM

Ty Donna for such a nice review Shadow x smile

Donna Jones
Date: 11/5/2013 12:21:00 PM

You captured this so beautifully

Bl Devnath

Date: 11/5/2013 10:21:00 AM

Excellent analogy my lovely friend. Philosophically adorned and led to the depth of inner consciousness. Lovely done, my friend. Loved always, bl

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 11/5/2013 3:15:00 PM

Bl Ty always appreciate your reviews Shadow x smile

Russell Sivey

Date: 11/5/2013 10:16:00 AM

This is a gorgeous and wonderful write my friend! I really enjoyed reading this inventive poem this morning! You have creatively mastered the art of fire within the Earth! What a brilliant piece, Great Work!!

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 11/5/2013 3:16:00 PM

Russell I so much appreciate your feedback Ty Shadow x smile hug

Poet Tacito

Date: 11/5/2013 10:03:00 AM

This was damn beautiful in all facets of its creation & placement of life. Wonderful job!

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 11/5/2013 3:18:00 PM

Ty Drake One of those that wrote itself Ty for your wonderful review Shadow x smile hug