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Corazon Desangrado

Mientras miraba tu foto te imaginaba y con lagrimas en mis ojos me preguntaba si tu realmente sentias lo mismo por mi y si me amabas o si nomas era mi imaginación que me engañaba Esa linda sonrisa que hace brillar todo mi existir esa mirada tan tierna que alegra mi todo mi vivir aun cuando me encuentro triste sabes hacerme sonreir pues solo tu sabes cambiar en gozo mi sufrir El sentimiento es tan fuerte que no puedo contenerme lloro como un niño al pensar en que puedo perderte eres mi todo y lo unico que quiero es entre mis brazos tenerte pero entre más te amo menos puedo retenerte Con tu foto en la mano y mi rostro empapado le pido a Dios que cure este corazón desangrado no es mucho lo que pido solo el poder seguir de ti enamorado y que tu también me ames como lo hiciste en un pasado.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 5/5/2016 1:56:00 AM
IVAN, this is an awesome poem, thank you for sharing. --SKAT
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Date: 4/20/2016 3:37:00 AM
Ivan Cisneros, nicely done. Glad to read your poem today. XoX *Linda*"
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Date: 7/11/2012 5:48:00 AM
Had to come back and let you know that the poets here would love to see these poems of yours in English. Poetry does not have to Rhyme to be outstanding poetry. You might be surprised at how many poets would see the meaning you present in your poems. But in the end it is up to you. Again welcome to PoetrySoup Love, Carol
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Date: 7/11/2012 5:43:00 AM
A belated welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you today Ivan. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/6/2012 7:54:00 AM
Yes, they are all good. I can translate them, but they would loose their meaning and they wouldn't rhyme.
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Date: 7/5/2012 9:48:00 PM
They loose their meaning in translation...sorry :/
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Date: 7/5/2012 5:06:00 PM
Ivan , I cannot translate any of them, but I have a feeling they are good, I would like to see them in English...David
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