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Coral Pink

It's still alive, the rose he gave Coral pink like the blush of our cheeks It's life makes my own so worthless Thriving upon nothing, for weeks They say that colors make the mood I don't live by what others say I only pick the ones I want to hear And then I go on my way If he is happy I know not I only know this old rose is still pink If the sky is crying, let me cry too Washing away each tear as I blink Fading as each day passes by But faithfully retaining it's hue Lying nostalgically beside my bed Stunningly against the wall's blue

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 5/25/2017 5:31:00 PM
Lovely!
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Date: 1/22/2014 12:55:00 PM
Pleasing rose poem. Especially like the line "It the sky is crying, let me cry too." No wonder it won a contest. Warm regards.
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Date: 12/6/2013 5:19:00 PM
Coral pink is a winner!
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Date: 10/30/2013 12:52:00 PM
Juli, ~~loving the pink thoughts from your pen. Nice win.......... SKAT~~
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Date: 10/29/2013 8:47:00 PM
Hi Juli, this is very nice... beautiful..... congrats...LINDA
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Date: 10/29/2013 5:08:00 AM
- Always enjoyable to read your poetry - Today I want to congratulate your winning poem Julie Michelle. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/28/2013 9:49:00 PM
Julie. I very much enjoyed reading your poem again. Keep writing, and I'll keep reading. CTB
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Date: 10/28/2013 8:52:00 PM
nicely penned...congrats on your win :)
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Date: 10/23/2013 9:12:00 PM
Juli, congratulations in The rose (Allegory) contest................. SKAT
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Date: 10/22/2013 11:18:00 PM
Hi Juli,. CONGRATULATIONS... always & forever~ LINDA
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Date: 10/19/2013 5:37:00 AM
Congrats on your winning work..Way to go!!!Sara
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Date: 10/15/2013 4:39:00 PM
Congratulations on your contest placement. I enjoyed the read.... Jake
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Date: 10/15/2013 7:55:00 AM
Congrats on the win in the contest, Juli
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Date: 10/15/2013 7:37:00 AM
Congrats on your winning placement, Julie! I enjoyed reading your touching and very lovely poem this morning...have a great day...Love and blessings, Rhonda
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Date: 10/9/2013 5:00:00 PM
I agree, I think colors do affect our moods sometimes, as does the weather. You described your emotions in a unique and beautiful way. A very nicely written quatrain, Juli-Michelle! Wonderful work!...Thank you for the placement in your contest. I appreciate it very much!
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Date: 10/7/2013 10:07:00 AM
AWW........ such a sweet poem written from your heart ! Enjoyed stopping by ! :p ........Saanvi
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Date: 10/7/2013 12:04:00 AM
This is so pretty and touching. I feel you in this one.
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Date: 10/5/2013 11:32:00 PM
Love the poem you worked on....emotional and nice to read.Best luck
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Date: 10/5/2013 2:16:00 PM
poignant traces of memories written so eloquently, juli... i am impressed!..:) huggs
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Date: 10/5/2013 9:46:00 AM
Very emotional write, Juli
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Date: 10/4/2013 6:42:00 PM
Wonderful work! Each line carried into the next in such a natural way...and brings up many past remembrances.
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Date: 10/4/2013 4:26:00 PM
very beautifully penne
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Date: 10/4/2013 2:45:00 PM
-Touching and beautiful, July-Michell! - Have a beautiful weekend. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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