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Cool summer forest

Emerald moss back stones
Drenching sunlight trickle
Where I rest my mind

(Inspired by Raul Moreno’s Solace in nature contest) 

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Date: 1/16/2010 9:24:00 AM
Laura, Today I am taking the time to enjoy myself reading some of my favorite poems. Your poem, "Cool summer forest " is one of my favorites. I wanted to let you know that I enjoyed reading it, again. Thank you for sharing. Lovingly, Dane Ann
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Date: 12/27/2009 5:03:00 PM
nice, peaceful verse Light & Love
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Date: 12/21/2009 5:23:00 AM
Oh Laura, such a a beautiful haiku! What a joy hearing from you. Yes, its been a crazy year full of complications - we still have not moved, unable to sell our house so far. A big ugly pod sitting in our driveway (maybe that's why!) anyway - Merry Christmas and happy holidays to you and yours and all the best in the new year. Miss you so much - you are such a joy to know. Thanks from my heart for thinking of me. Brought a warm smile inside and out. hugs & love, shar xoxo
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Date: 9/27/2009 8:01:00 AM
Wow, Laura, This is superb! The imagery is perfect. Keep the great words flowing. SMILES, Dane
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Date: 9/10/2009 8:18:00 AM
Simply beautiful, Laura! It gives me a peaceful feeling in reading it. I have missed your words and I see that I have missed a lot since I was last on the site. Good luck with this perfect Haiku! Love, Robin
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Date: 9/9/2009 5:09:00 AM
Laura, looks like a winner to me. Awesome Haiku my friend. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/8/2009 1:24:00 PM
God speed in the contest. Nicely expressive Haiku. Sara
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Date: 9/8/2009 12:56:00 PM
Hi Laura Just beautiful Laura! Well written Haiku. Last line is perfecto! Take care Love Light Truth Patricia
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Date: 9/8/2009 11:45:00 AM
Hi, Laura! How are you doing, today? Summer is almost gone, and I already miss the feeling of being in a cool forest. Your words describe the scene perfectly...the forest is the ideal place to rest the mind away from the urban noise. Well-written and inspiring. Good luck in the contest. Thanks for sharing it with me. Love, Andrew.
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Date: 9/8/2009 11:06:00 AM
Love the peaceful nature and solitude this brings to mind! Lovely, Laura!~ love, Carrie
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