Cool Sheets

cool sheets slip over our suits
warm embrace, slippery lips
dreamy eyes open and close
— alarm clock sounds off

10/16/2018
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Gentile Avatar
October 18, 2018 at 9:58 AM
I really loved this one Kim and love the slip over our suits. This is just so sensual and relatable!! Happy Thursday xxoo
Rodrigues Avatar
October 18, 2018 at 5:33 PM
Thank you, Mike! :)
Wolf Avatar
October 17, 2018 at 8:19 PM
They say that the prospect of death gives life its meaning... Alarm clocks? ---Not so much ... The frustration is palpable here. Nicely done, Kim! Best wishes, Gershon
Rodrigues Avatar
October 17, 2018 at 9:54 PM
Thanks, Gershon!
Green Avatar
October 17, 2018 at 4:18 PM
The best alarm clock is one that is turned off. :) Nice one Kim
Rodrigues Avatar
October 17, 2018 at 4:59 PM
LOL...right?!
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