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Cool Sheets

cool sheets slip over our suits warm embrace, slippery lips dreamy eyes open and close — alarm clock sounds off 10/16/2018

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Mike Gentile

Date: 10/18/2018 9:58:00 AM

I really loved this one Kim and love the slip over our suits. This is just so sensual and relatable!! Happy Thursday xxoo

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/18/2018 5:33:00 PM

Thank you, Mike! :)

Gershon Wolf

Date: 10/17/2018 8:19:00 PM

They say that the prospect of death gives life its meaning... Alarm clocks? ---Not so much ... The frustration is palpable here. Nicely done, Kim! Best wishes, Gershon

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/17/2018 9:54:00 PM

Thanks, Gershon!

Chris Green

Date: 10/17/2018 4:18:00 PM

The best alarm clock is one that is turned off. :) Nice one Kim

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/17/2018 4:59:00 PM

LOL...right?!