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Cool Refreshing Swim

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                                                       Bengal Tiger_ run
                                             Jump in water_ they don't swim
                                                     Primal instinct wins

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Doris Culverhouse

Date: 5/3/2010 5:49:00 AM

enjoyed--

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/30/2010 7:23:00 PM

Hey, so which one is in the contest then? I kind of prefer this one! thanks for your comment to me today. LUv, Andrea

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 4/30/2010 11:55:00 AM

Perfect words for the photo of the new contest by Raul.. the tiger is so awesome looking and I have paintings of tigers and leopards and panthers throughout my home as I luv those big cats .. so sleek and beautiful... good luck in Raul's contest with this one that definitely has "winner" written all over it..luv.. happy weekend.. Linda-Marie..

John Freeman

Date: 4/30/2010 11:26:00 AM

The Bengal, a beautiful animal Sara, Smile, they do like water. Are you saying they can't swim? My manx hates to get wet. He prefers to drink running water. weird!! Agape, Moses

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 4/30/2010 10:03:00 AM

Wishing you the best in Raul's Primal Instinct contest Sara. Love,Carol

Shay Funk

Date: 4/30/2010 8:45:00 AM

love it

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/30/2010 6:02:00 AM

love it , nice one SARA,..p..d

Gert W. Knop

Date: 4/30/2010 5:20:00 AM

Nicely written Haiku, Sara! Can see the tiger in the water (they are the only cats - except the Fish Cat- who swim). Thank you for your comments and have a great weekend...Gert

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