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Cool Fever

Wooden floor's relief Cooling fevered feet Pace, bare, in blackness As tranquil raindrops Softens prickly nerves Cloud covered stars Still shine, behind Glowing without Doubt's permission To find them Just look up Hope sees through The dark Like the Moon. 12/18/19 For 'Pick a Title, Volume 12 - Diminished Hexaverse' contest Sponsor: Edward Ibeh Title: Cool Fever

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Date: 1/12/2020 1:47:00 PM
Enjoyed seeing your entry here on the winners' list.Congrats to you.
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Date: 1/11/2020 8:04:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in my contest with this amazing poem, Michelle:-)
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Date: 1/10/2020 11:21:00 AM
Delicious lines, your imagery and creativity are royal sisters. Nice reading from the pen of your mind. Happy 2020.
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Date: 12/23/2019 9:00:00 PM
Impressive Michelle.
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 1/6/2020 6:35:00 PM
Thank you, rob-
Date: 12/18/2019 9:56:00 PM
Wow. !. A fave. x!
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 12/19/2019 10:01:00 PM
Thank you so much - I was actually inspired by your poem 'I See You Says the Moon' for the ending!
Date: 12/18/2019 7:55:00 PM
I especially like your first two lines! Great sensation and emotion!
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 12/19/2019 10:02:00 PM
Thanks, Kim!
Date: 12/18/2019 7:05:00 PM
Nicely put! Good luck, Michelle! Aloha! Rico
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 12/19/2019 10:01:00 PM
Thanks, Rico!

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