Michelle Faulkner Poet Diminished Hexaverse

Cool Fever

Wooden floor's relief
Cooling fevered feet
Pace, bare, in blackness
As tranquil raindrops
Softens prickly nerves

Cloud covered stars
Still shine, behind
Glowing without
Doubt's permission

To find them
Just look up
Hope sees through

The dark
Like the

Moon.

12/18/19

For 'Pick a Title, Volume 12 - Diminished Hexaverse' contest
Sponsor: Edward Ibeh

Title: Cool Fever

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Andrea Dietrich January 12, 2020 at 1:47 PM Enjoyed seeing your entry here on the winners' list.Congrats to you.

Edward Ibeh January 11, 2020 at 8:04 AM Congratulations on your win in my contest with this amazing poem, Michelle:-)

Funom Makama January 10, 2020 at 11:21 AM Delicious lines, your imagery and creativity are royal sisters. Nice reading from the pen of your mind. Happy 2020.

Rob Carmack December 23, 2019 at 9:00 PM Impressive Michelle. Michelle Faulkner January 6, 2020 at 6:35 PM Thank you, rob-

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart December 18, 2019 at 9:56 PM Wow. !. A fave. x! Michelle Faulkner December 19, 2019 at 10:01 PM Thank you so much - I was actually inspired by your poem 'I See You Says the Moon' for the ending!

Kim Rodrigues December 18, 2019 at 7:55 PM I especially like your first two lines! Great sensation and emotion! Michelle Faulkner December 19, 2019 at 10:02 PM Thanks, Kim!

Rico Leffanta December 18, 2019 at 7:05 PM Nicely put! Good luck, Michelle! Aloha! Rico Michelle Faulkner December 19, 2019 at 10:01 PM Thanks, Rico!