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Cool Damp Autumn Air

cool damp autumn air
contains much ragweed pollen...
surround sound effects  


Ack-chew

natureautumnhaiku

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Anthony Nutter

September 24, 2012 at 3:35 PM

Loved this one put a smile on my face

Jack Horne

September 24, 2012 at 2:23 PM

love this clever way of haiku sneezing, my friend : )

Russell Sivey

September 24, 2012 at 1:14 PM

This is so very true my friend! My grandmother has had a hard time with allergies this year! She has never had this much problems as she has had this year! This poem reflect this a lot, the ragweed in the air this year is tremendous for some reason! I really enjoyed this incredible write that I've read this afternoon! What a beautiful piece Sara, Great Work!!