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Cool Damp Autumn Air

cool damp autumn air contains much ragweed pollen... surround sound effects
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Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 9/24/2012 3:35:00 PM
Loved this one put a smile on my face
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Date: 9/24/2012 2:23:00 PM
love this clever way of haiku sneezing, my friend : )
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Date: 9/24/2012 1:14:00 PM
This is so very true my friend! My grandmother has had a hard time with allergies this year! She has never had this much problems as she has had this year! This poem reflect this a lot, the ragweed in the air this year is tremendous for some reason! I really enjoyed this incredible write that I've read this afternoon! What a beautiful piece Sara, Great Work!!
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Date: 9/24/2012 12:52:00 PM
I'm not as vulnerable to that stuff these days. When I was younger, I would sneeze my head off the entire month of September.
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Date: 9/24/2012 11:59:00 AM
Oh yes, that ragweed gets me everytime! wonderful haiku. :) Tanya
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Date: 9/24/2012 11:38:00 AM
Like it Sara, well done. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/24/2012 11:02:00 AM
you are on a 'ku roll, sara... a delightful write which great tonality... enjoyed!..) huggs!
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