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Cool Dad

Strutting down York Avenue, Appearing in a hurry, His face is beatific, Showing not a drop of worry. With one child in his hand grasp And another at his chest, He seems a modern father But he stands out from the rest. It isn’t for his man-bun, Rather for the clothes he wears – Not jeans or sweats or khakis, For it’s leggings earning stares. Today’s had printed donuts Looking fattening and sweet, While yesterday’s were swirled With every color you might meet. I wonder as his kids grow up If they’ll think he looks cool Or, as I perceived when others gaped, More like a kingdom’s fool.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 5/7/2018 4:28:00 PM
The uplifting rhythm and wording is amazing in this!
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Date: 4/25/2018 11:43:00 AM
I'm not sure what to make of this poem. I assume you witnessed this but where I come from, we would have been agog to something like this. I live a sheltered life I guess. Each to his own however.
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Ilene Bauer
Date: 4/25/2018 12:16:00 PM
Hey Dean! I live in Manhattan, the heart of NYC, and the best part of living here is all the characters I get to see on a daily basis. Thanks for reading and commenting...
Date: 4/20/2018 2:24:00 AM
As kids get older they seem to do their own thing and not be seen with their parents, especially if the dress ,how can I say ,odd lol . Tom.
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Date: 4/19/2018 5:58:00 PM
From your vivid description he sounds like a very colourful character indeed! I don't know if you ever heard the song' daddy cool' by Boney M, but it is buzzing in my brain after reading your poem:-) hugs jan xx
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