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Cool Beauty

Hailstones falling from the sky blown by a cold icy cutting wind bouncing off the ground clouds black to grey shawl winter takes hold The ground takes shades of white snow capping the mountains peaks First snowflake falls gently melting settling on one finger Thoughts drifting away inside the soft touch Petals caressing heart and soul singing a choir chanting pulling strings blowing warm breaths clouding steam frozen whisper of time feelings flutter into your space Dancing to loves tune weaving our silken soft emotions together ribbons of light piercing a single teardrop holds beautiful love in high esteem I will take you my love higher to where the heart darling will always and forever surrender to you without pain The snow queen smile, cracks ice

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 12/10/2014 12:34:00 PM
Very beautiful pen as always my dearest Liam! Just dazzling! Very tender and so romantic! You got the golden quill! I truly enjoyed! a 7 +++for you ! May you feel the presence and the warmth of the Lord and all His Angels around you all the time, dear friend. Always praying for you here every day. :) Love and hugs! xxxx D.
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 12/12/2014 3:56:00 PM
thank you kindly dorian dear pal for the dazzling beautiful comment bless you

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