Cool Beauty

Hailstones falling from the sky 
blown by a cold icy cutting wind
bouncing off the ground
clouds black to grey shawl 
winter takes hold 

The ground takes shades of white 
snow capping the mountains peaks
First snowflake falls 
gently melting settling on one finger

Thoughts drifting away inside the soft touch
Petals caressing heart and soul singing 
a choir chanting pulling strings 
blowing warm breaths clouding steam 
frozen whisper of time
feelings flutter into your space

Dancing to loves tune 
weaving our silken soft emotions together
ribbons of light piercing a single teardrop
holds beautiful love in high esteem

I will take you my love higher
to where the heart darling 
will always and forever 
surrender to you without pain 
The snow queen smile, cracks ice
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Petersen Potter Avatar
December 10, 2014 at 12:34 PM
Very beautiful pen as always my dearest Liam! Just dazzling! Very tender and so romantic! You got the golden quill! I truly enjoyed! a 7 +++for you ! May you feel the presence and the warmth of the Lord and all His Angels around you all the time, dear friend. Always praying for you here every day. :) Love and hugs! xxxx D.
Mcdaid Avatar
December 12, 2014 at 3:56 PM
thank you kindly dorian dear pal for the dazzling beautiful comment bless you
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