Cool Air

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Image result for pictures of an early fall morn with the sun casting long shadows

cool air of the morn surrounds a crispness feeling so it seems. sunlight appears on the horizon. the end of nightly dreams

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Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/26/2023 5:45:00 AM

- When the day starts with this picture... it must be a lovely day, Sara :) - The air is cold but fresh ... - Autumn at its most beautiful time :) - hugs

Sara Kendrick
Date: 9/26/2023 10:20:00 AM

Yes, autumn is beginning with a few leaves turned here and there. I hope that is it a colorful year. Thanks for stopping by with the nice review of my work. Sara

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 9/26/2023 3:50:00 AM

A gem of a poem. Great imagery. Blessings.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 9/26/2023 10:19:00 AM

Why, thank you, Victor. I need all the blessings I can get. Sara

Valsa George

Date: 9/24/2023 7:41:00 PM

Beautiful start to a pleasant morning . The image and the poem, both are lovely!

Sara Kendrick
Date: 9/25/2023 4:06:00 AM

Valsa, you know just what to say to make my day. Thank you, Sara.

Vijay Pandit

Date: 9/24/2023 9:07:00 AM

Beautiful photo of sunrise--evokes fond memories of night dreams. Charming write, Sara.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 9/25/2023 4:05:00 AM

Why, thank you, Vijay. I appreciate the visit and kind review of my work. Sara

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 9/24/2023 5:36:00 AM

this is much deeper than it seems, layer on layer it builds. kudus dear friend hugs Shadow

Sara Kendrick
Date: 9/24/2023 6:53:00 AM

Why, thank you, Shadow. A long time since I have seen you on here. Thanks for dropping by . Sara