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Coo Coo Doves

Three white doves sitting on a line One said to the other "Hey, that one's mine" The other said to another "But I'm with you" So, they all cooed together... And away they flew

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 8/31/2022 7:22:00 PM

Great kids' stuff, Charlie. I'm still using that greasy stuff in my hair though... ~ Bryl-cream, a little dab'll do ya

Bill Baker

Date: 8/31/2022 8:18:00 AM

Enjoyable read my friend. Made me smile, thanks, Charlie. Bill

Michael Tor

Date: 8/31/2022 4:13:00 AM

Great theme and rhyme Charles enjoy reading, thanks for posting...

Mike Gentile

Date: 8/30/2022 5:31:00 AM

This is so cute Charlie!! I can easily picture this from your lovely write! Happy Tuesday!!

Harry Horsman

Date: 8/29/2022 5:58:00 PM

Love this cool ditty, in fact sang it, and it would certainly be a hit. Charles.

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 8/27/2022 4:19:00 PM

Hello Charles, they all flew away together. Enjoy your evening my friend.

Paul Callus

Date: 8/27/2022 7:06:00 AM

How delightfully cute this is, Charles! I love the smooth flow of your lines. Regards // paul

Charles Messina
Date: 8/27/2022 11:41:00 AM

Thank you, Paul. I appreciate the visit my friend. Regards, Charlie

Deb M

Date: 8/25/2022 11:32:00 PM

Charlie that is the cutest poem! Sweet as….Debx

Charles Messina
Date: 8/26/2022 1:09:00 PM

Love to write "cute" poems (lol). thank you, Deb! Charlie x

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 8/25/2022 10:24:00 PM

Quite funny really. Loved it.

Charles Messina
Date: 8/26/2022 1:08:00 PM

Thanks, Victor. Glad you liked it!