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i could ask the relationship of the water and the wind or i could seek the knowledge of the wise man would he tell me where the ends of the world are? would he show me another world ? could i ask him to make me better or is the way i am just fine would his voice be deep with power or will it remind me of my father how will i ask whats in store for me ? will i want to know ? would his words nurture me like my mother or guide me to another path . could i ask for forgivness or has he already forgiven me . will i studder on my words or does he know what ii have to say . how can i word that im scared but still seem strong could i pray face to face and ask for her would i ask for a long life or to fly all these would suit well i suppose but i would only bask in his presence and listen to his word because all of my questions , he already knows .

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Date: 11/28/2009 12:26:00 PM
Powerful, deeply moving. Another excellent write. You are already in my favorites. And once again, I know why. Thank you for writing and sharing your heart. My love to you. Lovingly, Dane Ann.
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Date: 11/21/2009 2:04:00 PM
Congratulations on getting a placement in Matt's contest with this piece!
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