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Convalescents

Convalescents Ocean of radical heather signify: welcome waves of moorland mist, deluge of dewy tears fall on this place heavenly kissed. Wooden bench outside the old hay barn, where the sultry breeze in sugar hill dances, orchestrates the old folk with war-torn minds reminisce those given a life of second chances. © Harry J Horsman 2020

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Date: 1/16/2020 10:56:00 AM
As I read I sat on the bench reminiscing days of old...
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Date: 1/15/2020 11:28:00 PM
nicely done :-)
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Date: 1/15/2020 12:24:00 AM
Wow an awesome poem with imagery and muse portrayed in marvellous wording and touch of phrase . It paints a picture with poetic words. Kudos.!! Pleez do review/ comment my newest poem too.
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Date: 1/14/2020 5:47:00 PM
nostalgic and poetic. shalom shalom Sir
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Date: 1/14/2020 12:17:00 PM
I remember that brilliant poem you wrote Harry, and this verse is a poem in its own right. Good luck. Tom
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Date: 1/14/2020 11:14:00 AM
The imagery and flow are so well done, Harry,good luck in the contest. Hugs Eve
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Date: 1/14/2020 10:22:00 AM
This is so beautiful Harry. I need to go and read the entire poem as I wanted this to go on and on. I hope to see this a top winner! xxoo
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