Convalescents

Convalescents

Ocean of radical heather signify: welcome waves of moorland mist, deluge of dewy
tears fall on this place heavenly kissed. Wooden bench outside the old hay barn,
where the sultry breeze in sugar hill dances, orchestrates the old folk with war-torn minds reminisce those given a life of second chances.

 © Harry J Horsman 2020
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Michael Avatar
January 16, 2020 at 10:56 AM
As I read I sat on the bench reminiscing days of old...
Duncan Avatar
January 15, 2020 at 11:28 PM
nicely done :-)
Kamoonpuri Avatar
January 15, 2020 at 12:24 AM
Wow an awesome poem with imagery and muse portrayed in marvellous wording and touch of phrase . It paints a picture with poetic words. Kudos.!! Pleez do review/ comment my newest poem too.
Deo Avatar
January 14, 2020 at 5:47 PM
nostalgic and poetic. shalom shalom Sir
Cunningham Avatar
January 14, 2020 at 12:17 PM
I remember that brilliant poem you wrote Harry, and this verse is a poem in its own right. Good luck. Tom
Roper Avatar
January 14, 2020 at 11:14 AM
The imagery and flow are so well done, Harry,good luck in the contest. Hugs Eve
Marcum Wong Avatar
January 14, 2020 at 10:22 AM
This is so beautiful Harry. I need to go and read the entire poem as I wanted this to go on and on. I hope to see this a top winner! xxoo
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