Bl Devnath Poet Haiku

Controls From Centre

Spider's gossamer
                                           crafts net trap's solar system
                                                 controls from center










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Sheri Fresonke Harper June 29, 2013 at 10:33 PM BL, wonderful haiku, congratulations. Bl Devnath June 30, 2013 at 12:19 AM Many thanks for your wishes. Loved always,bl

Sara Kendrick June 24, 2013 at 12:36 PM Cute one for the contest...Congrats on your win..Sara Bl Devnath June 24, 2013 at 8:50 PM Thanks a lot my friend for wishing me congrats. Loved always, bl

Joyce Johnson June 20, 2013 at 5:15 PM clever haiku. Congratulations. Love, Joyce Bl Devnath June 24, 2013 at 8:50 PM Thanks a lot my friend for wishing me congrats. Loved always, bl

Harry Horsman September 8, 2012 at 5:35 AM this is so clever, bl, awesome.

Andrea Dietrich September 8, 2012 at 1:25 AM Yes, I can see this!!

Robert Pettit September 7, 2012 at 11:05 AM A spider can consider his web his very own solar system. He is the sun, and everything revolves around him. Another good haiku.