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Contrails Haiku






abandoned orchard
pink buds adorn weathered branch
contrails across sky

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Gert W. Knop

February 22, 2011 at 4:35 AM

Enjoyed the read of this Haiku, Barbara! What a picture, an abandoned garden and above a blue sky with the white contrails of planes....Nice one...Gert

Andrea Dietrich

February 20, 2011 at 12:58 AM

this is gonna sound stupid, but I don't know what contrails means! anyway, it sounds splendid!! Is it just like lines across the sky? If so, what a wonderful picture this makes.

Debbie Guzzi

February 18, 2011 at 4:34 PM

excellent haiku! ---abandoned orchard title..no need for another line ;) Light & Love

Carolyn Devonshire

February 17, 2011 at 11:27 AM

I like the thought of the "buds bursting in air," like the contrails of the rockets in our national anthem. Still, there is sadness that this orchard has been abandoned and there is no one around to appreciate the beauty. Excellent haiku, dear LNC. Love, Carolyn