Contradictions African Winter Hair Revelation

Both time

&

Life is fleeting

Birth most certainly

Similataniously 

Also leads and ends in death

Like the winter climate in South Africa

Johannesburg specifically during Winter

As coming in the end of Autumnal May

When the Summer rains have gone and is over

Everything and all around has turned

Brittle dry and a hue colored brow

What then becomes a familiar sight

Is seeing desolate scrubs of wasteland set alight

All burnt down until sand and black charred remains 

Are all that is left to be seen

However fortunately when spring eventually arrives

Bringing with it fort it's quenching thirsting rain 

That same barren ravaged landscape

Renews and brings forth with it fresh life again

Simararilay like when we go and get a haircut

In order to remove and cut off split ends

Which makes it once more grow and thrive again

But as a caveat I am also willing to admit

There is most always an exception to the rule

And if I may please use myself as an example

To prove this point if you are willing to indulge me

In regards to me using a haircut as a metaphor

That is until one day you are like me

Find yourself not having to cut your hair anymore

As you haven't got anymore no longer to cut

You are now Bald and it unfortunately

Ain't coming or you aren't able to grow back

And it is only after that and at that point

You will eventually finally come to understand

And finally eventually realize and begin to appreciate 

That which you seemingly took for granted 

The difference between linear thinking

Life and Deaths
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Date: 11/8/2023 6:12:00 PM
A haircut as a metaphor.. an interesting description.. i really like how you described it and really take the reader on a journey about your perspective and nice ending..
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Christopher Flaherty
Date: 11/9/2023 4:09:00 PM
Thanking you once again for commenting on my work King regards
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