Richard Lamoureux Poet Free verse

Contortionists Test

I enjoyed wrapping my mind around his words
Stretching my thinking
At times coming unglued
Reaching towards oblivion
While keeping my feet in multiple worlds
Standing on sinking ground  
While leaning on granites precious solidity

The substance of imaginations inconsistencies
Tugging on the heart strings of a well played heart
Wondering along the pathway of dreams long held at arms length
Hoping to understand
Taking that backward look while moving forward and upward 

Words are his gift
Dropped like psychedelic bombs 
Ripping at the fabric of convention
Pain wrapped in sheepskin 
Joy pushed through pencils point
Leaving me in awe
Dancing and stretching along
Bouncing against his liquid walls
Till I come out the other side
Understanding
Landing 
Blessed
More than I was before
Yet part of myself
Stays behind
Trying to catch my breath


Dedicated to Drake

Submitted to Debbie's Guzzi's Referential Contest
"Closer" By Chris Aechtner reminded me of Drakes Work
and Drakes unusual word combinations thus inspiring 
the above piece.

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Skat A July 18, 2013 at 10:11 PM Richard, Nice to see you on Debbie Guzzi, winning list...... Congratulations! Hugs* SKAT Richard Lamoureux July 19, 2013 at 6:22 AM Thanks SKAT

Debbie Guzzi July 18, 2013 at 2:44 PM Can't wait to see what Chris thinks of all the writing his write has inspired [so far no Chris :(] Congrad's on your fine work winning! Light & Love Richard Lamoureux July 19, 2013 at 6:22 AM Thanks Debbie, I am glad you enjoyed it.

Tim Ryerson July 17, 2013 at 5:00 AM Now this is one of the best poems I have seen by you Richard...'Pain wrapped in sheepskin'...WOW...Great tribute to a very fine poet just like yourself sir - Tim Richard Lamoureux July 17, 2013 at 6:20 AM Thanks Tim, I had fun writing this one.

Andrea Dietrich July 8, 2013 at 2:31 PM wow, you really emulated his style very well. I was thinking, this does not really sound like Craig, and now I know why!! Very good. I know debs will be pleased with this entry. Richard Lamoureux July 9, 2013 at 8:34 AM Thanks Andrea

Charmaine Chircop July 7, 2013 at 2:58 PM He is an amazing writer..One of my favourite poets and favourite friends..He inspires me a lot too.and am lucky to be able to read his work on ps.Did you hear his last poem on the show?I enjoyed reading your poem above..Its awesome..especially the first line..Your words got me wrapped up too with blessings and gratitude to have you amongst us. Richard Lamoureux July 7, 2013 at 6:48 PM Thanks Charmaine, blessings are always great.

Kim Van Breda July 7, 2013 at 1:33 PM I Love Drake's work too. You have really done an excellent job of applauding him in this 'masterpiece' in its own right. Well done. Richard Lamoureux July 7, 2013 at 6:50 PM Thanks Kim that is a very sweet thing to say.

Karen Anglesey July 7, 2013 at 11:48 AM Your striking word combinations are brilliant as well. A very fine tribute to a very fine poet. Fantastic lines "Joy pushed through pencils point Leaving me in awe.. Surely a winner in any contest :) Richard Lamoureux July 7, 2013 at 12:29 PM Thanks Karen;0)

Colleen Bono July 7, 2013 at 10:51 AM sounds very complicated.Love Colleen Richard Lamoureux July 7, 2013 at 12:30 PM Good morning Colleen

Nette Onclaud July 7, 2013 at 10:44 AM yeahhh, the movement is subtle yet strong... your imagery is simply stunning in its ebb and flow. The last stanza is a singular act of boldness, richard... a very fine poem!..:) huggs Richard Lamoureux July 7, 2013 at 12:31 PM Good morning and thanks for this lovely comment.

Eileen Manassian July 7, 2013 at 8:02 AM Knew who it was for from the title! Great great great work, Richard. You amaze. His work does take me places too...How sweet of you! Richard Lamoureux July 7, 2013 at 1:32 PM ;0) Eileen Manassian July 7, 2013 at 8:18 AM Yes...I noticed. You succeeded....I had to stop now and again to double check...granites precious solidity...Yes...you did well. :-D I can't....great Drake style, Richard. Richard Lamoureux July 7, 2013 at 8:06 AM Thanks Eileen I should call this form Drake Style I tried to capture a bit of his essence in this piece.

Poet Tacito July 7, 2013 at 7:53 AM RICHARD! Holy crap!!! =) I woke up not 20 minutes ago and then I read this. What a start to my day!!!! This is what it's all about my poets: Inspiring just one reader of your work. You do that, mission accomplished! I am so deeply grateful for this poem. This made me smile ear to ear! I won't forget this. Such powerful lines! *Standing Ovation* Eileen Manassian July 9, 2013 at 2:29 AM The title...cause Richard had writing something to that effect in a post on your poem...the contortionist bit. I knew it must be you from that reference from his post.... Richard Lamoureux July 7, 2013 at 8:08 AM My pleasure drake, your reaction has caused me to smile ear to ear as well. I guess smiles are contagious. Eileen Manassian July 7, 2013 at 8:01 AM Beat me to it, Drake. I read it before you did and was wondering when you'd see it! I KNEW from the title it was for you! :) Glad you posted first. I knew you'd love it! :)