Continue To Shock

represented- projected reflected
from everywhichaway today is
everyday & what can i say i'm
working towards the end & my
reasons are in the air (i don't care)
but i'll defend, give you a spank
on the rear end. don't commend
the likes of me cuz you like me
continue to shock- startling
developments which i systematic
ally destroy.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 5/29/2010 8:17:00 PM
Very powerful write to shock
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Date: 5/29/2010 5:37:00 PM
strong write, truely enjoyed, hope you have a nice memorial weekend . P.D.
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Date: 5/29/2010 3:25:00 PM
LOTS OF STRONG WORDS. ENJOYED, HAVE ANICE 1,,IRMA
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