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'continuance'

loving arms await his smile caress her senses no time to look back there is always tomorrow all that matter is today 190620112120

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/23/2011 8:58:00 PM

this is lovely, Wilma. and thanks for telling me the train story!

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 6/23/2011 5:14:00 AM

Hi Wilma! Thanks for your comments. Lovde 'em... nice poem ... bet that girl is getting sick of worrying about the future eh? Most of the time today is all that matters anyway... live life in the moment. Hope you can do it ... I can't seem to :) love ya

Kacey Greenlee

Date: 6/22/2011 4:01:00 PM

You have alot of feeling entwined in such a short poem.Very nice....enjoyed Wilma....have a great evening......

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 6/22/2011 1:13:00 PM

We often spend too much time worrying about the past or future when we should enjoy living in the moment. A tender and moving tanka, dear Wilma. Love, Carolyn

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 6/22/2011 1:01:00 PM

this one strikes a chord with me Wilma ..though I read it before the words are so magnetic to me.. making it a fav luv..

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 6/21/2011 5:27:00 PM

Very romantic write ... Lucky soul who gets these words.. Hope your week is less crazy then most...love Michael

Constance La France

Date: 6/21/2011 4:08:00 PM

"liive for the moment" beautiful message Wilma, and a lovely Tanka, well done~~

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 6/21/2011 8:30:00 AM

ooh wee- this sure is an inspiring and love-ly tanka, missy-- wHo, pray tell inspired this?? and haha methinks the babe magnet might actually be flattered that you called him that?? ;) I'm doing good, hope you are too :) hugs

Kash Poet

Date: 6/20/2011 9:56:00 PM

Hmm..I was" looking back" two days ago..LOL.Excellent Tanka here Wilma...enjoyed.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 6/20/2011 2:58:00 PM

so true Wilma.. all that matters is today my friend...and those loving arms and smiling caresses are super important.. a lovely expression my friend..luv..

Nette Onclaud

Date: 6/20/2011 12:22:00 PM

and bright today is all that matters, wilms.. an engaging, heartfelt write! :) huggs, nette

James Foulk

Date: 6/20/2011 11:25:00 AM

your line there is always tomorrow reminds me of the movie Gone with the Wind, the last line in the movie was when scarett O'Hara said that to herself. this was a very creative Tanka, enjoyed it. thank you for Summers Gone By.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 6/19/2011 6:32:00 PM

Nice positive anf hopeful expressions, Wilma

Delysia Hendricks

Date: 6/19/2011 1:58:00 PM

Whoop-whoop!! Somebody must have had a good weekend. Good one, Wilma. I like - very much. :))