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My rhyme
‘Sublime’

Low ‘win’
A sin

Last place
Sour face

I moan
And groan

Me thinks
Judge stinks

Bad judge…
Holds grudge

First place…
Disgrace!

Detests
Contests!

05~25~17

(The title is a homograph)

Copyright © Jan Allison | Year Posted 2017

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FJ Thomas Date: 1/7/2020 9:59:00 AM Oh my how sly/ my friend don't bend/ these days you slay! ;^* Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 1/7/2020 2:42:00 PM lol Flo, we have all seen how the contests are judged and know who is going to place who at the top - some things never change.. but I write for the challenge, for the joy being creative and to try and make you proud of how far I have come:-) hugs Jan xx

James Inman Date: 6/8/2017 6:17:00 AM Fun with Footles Jan, great title, very clever. Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 6/10/2017 7:15:00 PM Thanks James I couldn't resist that title !!!:-) hugs Jan xx

Joanna Daniel Date: 5/31/2017 4:48:00 AM I like this one, Jan, very honest and funny too:):) Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 5/31/2017 6:45:00 AM Made me giggle writing it Jo:-) hugs Jan xx

Lim'Rik Flats Date: 5/28/2017 7:55:00 AM Boo hoo, that's poo! ;-) Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 5/28/2017 7:59:00 AM ha ha ha:-) hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich Date: 5/27/2017 8:23:00 PM haha. I think everyone here has had at least a few of these thoughts running through their minds over the contests here. WELL done. I love these, Jan. Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 5/28/2017 4:13:00 AM I had fun with this one and I thought the title was quite ironic Andrea lol I remember someone submitted double footles to my last contest as although they are not what i would have thought of footles they do actually work and of course Brian's form has evolved:-) hugs Jan xx

Paul Callus Date: 5/27/2017 5:31:00 PM This string of Footles is really good, Jan; would have made a winning entry in a footles contest! Hugs // paul Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 5/28/2017 4:08:00 AM I may use it as an example if I do another contest lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Darren White Date: 5/27/2017 12:02:00 PM Charade! // Betrayed! // Sack judge // bye grudge // Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 5/28/2017 4:07:00 AM ha ha ha:-) hugs Jan xx

Arthur Vaso Date: 5/26/2017 9:43:00 PM So funny, I can see a few fit this one!! Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 5/27/2017 7:37:00 AM lol behave!:-) hugs Jan xx

Chris Green Date: 5/26/2017 4:57:00 PM This was fun Jan. Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 5/26/2017 5:59:00 PM I love the footle and limerick form I wrote this one some time ago now:-) hugs Jan xx

Dale Gregory Cozart Date: 5/26/2017 4:20:00 PM cute! Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 5/26/2017 5:58:00 PM thanks Dale:-) hugs jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 5/26/2017 4:13:00 PM - Great footle, Jan - Happy weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 5/26/2017 4:20:00 PM Thanks Anne Lise:-) have a lovely weekend too:-) hugs Jan xx

Charmaine Chircop Date: 5/26/2017 2:53:00 PM Oh this judge sounds like Judge Judy on Tv. :)You put a smile on my face sweet one. Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 5/26/2017 2:55:00 PM I have just replied to your caterpillar comment now I am laughing!!!:-) hugs Jan xx

Lin Lane Date: 5/26/2017 12:55:00 PM don't cry/here's why....Jan writes/judge bites Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 5/26/2017 1:37:00 PM lol Lin:-) I actually wrote this some time back and to be honest I have done well in contests recently and many poems I write simply for fun and not for contests:-)win or lose as long as I am writing that is the important thing:-) hugs Jan xx

Tim Smith Date: 5/26/2017 12:48:00 PM chagrin...no win....repeat...you cheat Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 5/26/2017 1:36:00 PM ha ha ha love that Tim:-) I should turn this one into a collaboration too lol:-)hugs Jan xx

Eve Roper Date: 5/26/2017 12:36:00 PM fantastic like always, the feeling is mutual... Jan, I just noticed but because someone brought the attention to me there is no rating gage... I wonder why or are they working on the site. Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 5/26/2017 12:44:00 PM I've actually done REALLY well in contests recently and wrote this poem some weeks ago as a fun write - i don't care where I place as long as I am creative that is the main thing - many of my poems are not for contests just for the joy of writing:-) hugs Jan xx