Contemplating

laying eyes on you first time I wonder how that will feel beyond this virtual lines and images how will our senses appeal to us as fear and trepidation beating drums echoes louder drowning out good intentions which will stay true and strong.... virtue or fear? which will we let in .... past or future? as I lay pondering on the moment laying eyes on you first time
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Mcdaid Avatar
August 25, 2015 at 2:43 PM
oh sounds quite a bit of contemplating angeline through the mirrors always gives one away beautifully painted piece
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December 12, 2015 at 8:47 AM
all smiles to you liam beautiful comment
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