Jun-Jun Villanueva Poet Free verse

Contaminated

Breathed noisome pernicious whiff of dorp
                          Atmosphere spawned by amiss vicious deeds of humans
                                    Piercing in my physique
                                            Perforating soberly in every single venae of my being
                              Wrecking, ceasing this substantial existence
                Deserting me ... Lifeless...Inane.

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Carol Sunshine Brown September 21, 2011 at 1:13 PM Congratulations in the contest of P. D. "Featured Poem of The Week" Jun-Jun. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart September 17, 2011 at 5:10 PM CONGRATS JUN-JUN ON YOUR WONDERFUL WIN IN FEATURED POETRY WITH THIS RARE BEAUTY LUV..

Kim Merryman September 17, 2011 at 12:45 PM Congrats on your win. Kim

Kash Poet September 17, 2011 at 11:34 AM Congrats jun-jun on your win...enjoyed.

Dr.Ram Mehta September 17, 2011 at 8:30 AM Congratulations on the win in the contest of P.D. Jun-Jun

Caryl Ramsdale September 17, 2011 at 3:50 AM A winning congratulations! CR

Poet Destroyer A September 17, 2011 at 2:14 AM jun~nun,..Congratulations on your win, this is an amazing featured poem. Thank you so much for entering and sharing it with us. A super well done poem,, God bless,... LINDA

Carol Sunshine Brown June 13, 2011 at 11:28 AM Congratulations on your featured poem this week Jun-Jun. Love, Carol

Dr.Ram Mehta June 13, 2011 at 11:06 AM My congratulations on your poem being featured this week jun-jun

Linda-Marie Sweetheart June 12, 2011 at 9:53 PM congrats jun-jun on your featured poem this week on PS.. a great one to share with us luv..

Constance La France June 10, 2011 at 6:40 PM "deep and dark" and quite "sublime" my dear jun-jun, I adore your style and your poem~~

June 3, 2011 at 4:21 PM A very creative write, enjoyed the read and thank you for your comments. Alexa

June 2, 2011 at 7:59 PM This is a very nice poem...I enjoyed reading it.... and thank you for the nice comments on my poem...Love Scarlett

Caryl Muzzey June 2, 2011 at 6:40 PM A wonderful write, I enjoyed the read. Caryl

Dennis Bishop June 2, 2011 at 6:02 PM i enjoy reading your porty just as you enjoy mine and i could be able to find myself to writeing this. we could be able to inspire eachother- words from the heros of this word- happy writeing jun jun

Nick Bagnall June 2, 2011 at 4:37 AM unusual choice of words, about which I'm not entirely convinced, interesting way of dealing with this subject.

Cory Long June 2, 2011 at 3:56 AM this is nicely written. cory