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Contaminated

Breathed noisome pernicious whiff of dorp Atmosphere spawned by amiss vicious deeds of humans Piercing in my physique Perforating soberly in every single venae of my being Wrecking, ceasing this substantial existence Deserting me ... Lifeless...Inane.

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/21/2011 1:13:00 PM

Congratulations in the contest of P. D. "Featured Poem of The Week" Jun-Jun. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/17/2011 5:10:00 PM

CONGRATS JUN-JUN ON YOUR WONDERFUL WIN IN FEATURED POETRY WITH THIS RARE BEAUTY LUV..

Kim Merryman

Date: 9/17/2011 12:45:00 PM

Congrats on your win. Kim

Kash Poet

Date: 9/17/2011 11:34:00 AM

Congrats jun-jun on your win...enjoyed.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 9/17/2011 8:30:00 AM

Congratulations on the win in the contest of P.D. Jun-Jun

Caryl Ramsdale

Date: 9/17/2011 3:50:00 AM

A winning congratulations! CR

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/17/2011 2:14:00 AM

jun~nun,..Congratulations on your win, this is an amazing featured poem. Thank you so much for entering and sharing it with us. A super well done poem,, God bless,... LINDA

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 6/13/2011 11:28:00 AM

Congratulations on your featured poem this week Jun-Jun. Love, Carol

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 6/13/2011 11:06:00 AM

My congratulations on your poem being featured this week jun-jun

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 6/12/2011 9:53:00 PM

congrats jun-jun on your featured poem this week on PS.. a great one to share with us luv..

Constance La France

Date: 6/10/2011 6:40:00 PM

"deep and dark" and quite "sublime" my dear jun-jun, I adore your style and your poem~~

Date: 6/3/2011 4:21:00 PM

A very creative write, enjoyed the read and thank you for your comments. Alexa

Date: 6/2/2011 7:59:00 PM

This is a very nice poem...I enjoyed reading it.... and thank you for the nice comments on my poem...Love Scarlett

Caryl Muzzey

Date: 6/2/2011 6:40:00 PM

A wonderful write, I enjoyed the read. Caryl

Dennis Bishop

Date: 6/2/2011 6:02:00 PM

i enjoy reading your porty just as you enjoy mine and i could be able to find myself to writeing this. we could be able to inspire eachother- words from the heros of this word- happy writeing jun jun

Nick Bagnall

Date: 6/2/2011 4:37:00 AM

unusual choice of words, about which I'm not entirely convinced, interesting way of dealing with this subject.

Cory Long

Date: 6/2/2011 3:56:00 AM

this is nicely written. cory