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Consumption

Dying with my duty done, my life’s ambition filled, I hear and feel the rustling from that which I did build. Arachni-matron-me, I feasted ‘pon the mate I killed – Before creating (lovingly?) the sac that holds my brood. Chitinous appendages – a thousand eight-fold sets – Scramb-ling, tearing, clawing to escape their natal nets. Th’time is nigh, I’ll never see their thousand eye octets – I’m glad I cannot contemplate becoming their first food. (Poem is an "ochtfochlach", which is an Irish verse form of 8 lines. The rhyme scheme is aaab cccb.) Written on June 2, 2023 for the "Bag of Spiders Poetry Contest".

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Date: 7/19/2023 11:32:00 PM
"Dying with my duty done, my life’s ambition filled" - Started well and ended well too. Congratulations!
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Date: 7/18/2023 8:42:00 AM
I think the black widow spider has struck your pen creating such a fab poem, so descriptive abut their behaviour, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 7/17/2023 6:54:00 AM
Daniel, CONGRATS on your well-deserved win. Janice
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Date: 7/16/2023 9:15:00 PM
Congrats on 3rd place in my contest! Much respect toward your strict Irish verse rhyme scheme!!
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Date: 6/5/2023 5:19:00 AM
clever & thought provoking write indeed
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