Consumption

Dying with my duty done, my life’s ambition filled,
I hear and feel the rustling from that which I did build.
Arachni-matron-me, I feasted ‘pon the mate I killed –
Before creating (lovingly?) the sac that holds my brood.

Chitinous appendages – a thousand eight-fold sets –
Scramb-ling, tearing, clawing to escape their natal nets.
Th’time is nigh, I’ll never see their thousand eye octets –
I’m glad I cannot contemplate becoming their first food.


(Poem is an "ochtfochlach", which is an Irish verse form of 8 lines. The rhyme scheme is aaab cccb.)

Written on June 2, 2023 for the "Bag of Spiders Poetry Contest".
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Alex Avatar
July 19, 2023 at 11:32 PM
"Dying with my duty done, my life’s ambition filled" - Started well and ended well too. Congratulations!
Allison Avatar
July 18, 2023 at 8:42 AM
I think the black widow spider has struck your pen creating such a fab poem, so descriptive abut their behaviour, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
Canerdy Avatar
July 17, 2023 at 6:54 AM
Daniel, CONGRATS on your well-deserved win. Janice
Caliri Avatar
July 16, 2023 at 9:15 PM
Congrats on 3rd place in my contest! Much respect toward your strict Irish verse rhyme scheme!!
Horne Avatar
June 5, 2023 at 5:19 AM
clever & thought provoking write indeed
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