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Consuming Pain

My plate piled high with pain seasoned to taste engaged in the gorge as the dog waits for crumbs of me to hit the floor she is so loyal.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 4/2/2017 7:58:00 PM
Very imaginative Maureen. It is sad but that's alright. Very concise and tight yet over flowing with emotion as well. "Engaged in the gorge" is delightful. Well done. Have a wonderful night. Earl
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Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 4/2/2017 9:36:00 PM
Thank you Earl for these warm words, lovely visit. A wonderful evening to you too.
Date: 3/28/2017 8:49:00 PM
Amazing write. You capture emotion perfectly!
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Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 3/28/2017 9:08:00 PM
Thank you Sofia, you are very kind :) xomo
Date: 3/26/2017 11:59:00 PM
absolutely stunning...
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Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 3/27/2017 8:53:00 AM
Wow, thank you Glennerd. Honoured xomo
Date: 3/25/2017 7:08:00 AM
You make me struggle with imaginations, Maureen!Very good for lonely hearts
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Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 3/25/2017 7:35:00 AM
Thank you kind soul xomo!
Date: 3/25/2017 7:06:00 AM
You make struggle with imaginations, Maureen!Very good
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