Consuming Body Love

Potion number nine to six mixing instincts 
Primitive passion possessed bodies boiling points
Love consuming lust traversing together past trust
Tangled hands mingle with talon arms lengthening lost time
United legs step to cross paths at the same rate different lanes
Claiming bottomless renewed nights holding on tight
Tossed and turning rolled up with wait filled yearning
Playfully pulling the hearts pleated burning branded heat
Blazing fire fuming fragrant sweet scent heads rush
Secreting supple skins sensitive soft tender touch
Invisible love that consumes dark atmospheric distant
Imagine life full of face forced fuel feeding feeling
Satiated daily indulging less thought more action
Lonely laps body traps tracking lack of love making
Consuming loss seeking body love instead of heart shaping
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Robinson Jr. Avatar
December 18, 2017 at 10:49 PM
Great poem, Kristina! Physical love sans the spiritual love is a cancelled date of a patient heart wait. You express deep emotional thoughts w/such pen artistry. You WoW us every time your river ink runs thru our mind. Love and smiles always.
Callus Avatar
December 18, 2017 at 12:49 PM
This is passionately powerful, sensual and expressive, Kristina. A mixture of lust & love could be the ideal solution. Alliteration is very noticeable! Regards // paul
Inman Avatar
December 18, 2017 at 1:39 AM
Sometimes passion is an end of itself without the complication of emotional bondage.
Evans Avatar
December 17, 2017 at 7:45 PM
Rhythm, images, alliteration abound. Very nice.
Swartz Avatar
December 16, 2017 at 10:34 AM
Perfectly written Kristina. You make this sound like a physical and spiritual connection which is the best kind of love. And as usual your word choices are awesome!
Gondolf Avatar
December 16, 2017 at 6:07 AM
Kristina, it sounds like lust has won out over love, problem is lust always has an end but love can be everlasting. John
One Avatar
December 15, 2017 at 2:00 PM
Sensual write, but seems is is about a celestial spirit.... Well written Kristina..
Smith Avatar
December 15, 2017 at 11:36 AM
Very passionate Kristina
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