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Consuming Body Love

Potion number nine to six mixing instincts Primitive passion possessed bodies boiling points Love consuming lust traversing together past trust Tangled hands mingle with talon arms lengthening lost time United legs step to cross paths at the same rate different lanes Claiming bottomless renewed nights holding on tight Tossed and turning rolled up with wait filled yearning Playfully pulling the hearts pleated burning branded heat Blazing fire fuming fragrant sweet scent heads rush Secreting supple skins sensitive soft tender touch Invisible love that consumes dark atmospheric distant Imagine life full of face forced fuel feeding feeling Satiated daily indulging less thought more action Lonely laps body traps tracking lack of love making Consuming loss seeking body love instead of heart shaping

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Date: 12/18/2017 10:49:00 PM
Great poem, Kristina! Physical love sans the spiritual love is a cancelled date of a patient heart wait. You express deep emotional thoughts w/such pen artistry. You WoW us every time your river ink runs thru our mind. Love and smiles always.
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Date: 12/18/2017 12:49:00 PM
This is passionately powerful, sensual and expressive, Kristina. A mixture of lust & love could be the ideal solution. Alliteration is very noticeable! Regards // paul
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Date: 12/18/2017 1:39:00 AM
Sometimes passion is an end of itself without the complication of emotional bondage.
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Date: 12/17/2017 7:45:00 PM
Rhythm, images, alliteration abound. Very nice.
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Date: 12/16/2017 10:34:00 AM
Perfectly written Kristina. You make this sound like a physical and spiritual connection which is the best kind of love. And as usual your word choices are awesome!
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Date: 12/16/2017 6:07:00 AM
Kristina, it sounds like lust has won out over love, problem is lust always has an end but love can be everlasting. John
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Date: 12/15/2017 2:00:00 PM
Sensual write, but seems is is about a celestial spirit.... Well written Kristina..
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Date: 12/15/2017 11:36:00 AM
Very passionate Kristina
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