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Consumed With Desire

His fingertips traced my lips and lightly brushed my cheek until I sensed the warmth of a blush. Our last night would be spent with flames of fire in passion's romance, I was consumed with desire. In the soft glow of candle light, we undressed, and the sweetest words of love, we confessed. My blue gown of silk and lace, fell to the floor I eagerly moved closer, needing so much more. On this full moon night, how quickly time flies. At my side he sleeps while tears fall from my eyes If stardust wishes could keep him here with me I would be a perpetual believer in celestial fantasy. My heart whispered devout words, softly spoken. When he opened his eyes, our passion was awoken. Our last night was intimate and as sweet as a rose At last, we slumbered til morning, in love's repose. September 26, 2020 The Night of Passion and Desire Sponsored by: Faraz Ajmal

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Gordon Mcconnell

Date: 9/28/2020 12:15:00 PM

Such a lovely delicate write Jenna, filled with passion, sensuality and romance. Take care keeping safe, Blessings always,Gordon

Jenna Logan
Date: 9/30/2020 3:51:00 AM

Thank you for the kindness of your review, Gordon. I'm keeping safe, and those sentiments are returned in kind.

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 9/27/2020 6:29:00 AM

Desire's transformation into love's repose. Very nicely done Jenna! GL in the contest! Linda

Jenna Logan
Date: 9/30/2020 3:50:00 AM

Thanks ever so much for your kind wishes, Linda.

John Gondolf

Date: 9/27/2020 4:15:00 AM

Beautifully written, Jenna, soft and sensual. I love the third stanza, it could be a poem in itself. Best of luck in the contest. Hugs, john

Jenna Logan
Date: 9/30/2020 3:50:00 AM

Thanks so much for letting me know which you preferred, John.

Susan Ashley

Date: 9/26/2020 8:07:00 PM

Your poetic pen is aflame with passion and sizzles with sensual imagery, Jenna. A sad beauty of a last night with the one you love. Best wishes for a win and warmest wishes for you, my friend.. ~Susan

Jenna Logan
Date: 9/30/2020 3:50:00 AM

Beautifully sad is a last night spent with a loved one. Thank you very much, Susan.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 9/26/2020 3:12:00 PM

A very romantic and passionate verse Jenna, im sure it will do well. Good luck. Tom

Jenna Logan
Date: 9/26/2020 4:10:00 PM

Thanks so much, Tom. I'll not hold my breath waiting for contest placements lately. Not a problem...I have enough time to write~place or not.

Jan Allison

Date: 9/26/2020 2:52:00 PM

oh so beautiful Jenna, full of romance and passion and sensual imagery:-) a joy to read:-) hugs Jan xx

Jenna Logan
Date: 9/26/2020 4:08:00 PM

Thanks for your lovely comments, Jan. Your support is very kind.