Consumed Life's Winter Frame

Frozen sky and frost fastened ground
In the mystique mask of departing light 
They meet in the abode of those departed. 
The identities dissolve in inseparable oneness 
Bringing together in seamless proximity
The living and the dead
In gripping stillness and in deafening silence 
In fading light and in gloomy desolateness
Of the graveyard in the wasteland reclaimed
All engraved in the consumed life’s winter frame.

Defoliated trees clad in somber grief
Stand static as the shadowless sentinels
Lest those lying beneath the stones resurrect
And fly away with the northern wind.
The children of the past born under the sun
Left behind the warmth in the distant hearts
When time came to find a place within the earth.

The lonesome bouquet laced with love not yet dead
Carries the frozen fragrance of remembrance.
The defrosted soul may rise someday as mist
Enwrap the lives enfolded within despair
Of the cold embrace of the dried drops of tear.

Written : September 16, 2017
April 24, 2020
Contest : Strand Pick D, Any Theme, Any Form
Sponsor : Brian Strand

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 9/20/2017 7:57:00 PM
Congratulations Subimal, on your well-deserved win with this beautiful poem with amazing imagery.
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Date: 9/20/2017 12:02:00 PM
Subimal , beautifully penned CONGRATULATIONS!
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Date: 9/20/2017 8:05:00 AM
Congratulations Subimal ! :)
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 9/20/2017 11:10:00 AM
Thank you, Heidi.
Date: 9/20/2017 7:35:00 AM
Congrats Subimal!
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 9/20/2017 11:11:00 AM
Thanks Vijay.
Date: 9/20/2017 6:54:00 AM
Great imagery and use of words in your poem... The defrosted soul may rise as mist.. great line.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 9/20/2017 11:05:00 AM
Thank you so much. I value your comments very much.
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