Consumed

I feel the agony Crawling up my legs Gnawing at my arms Ripping into me Trying to take over I fight and fight Till the pain grows Never stopping as it eats away at me Ripping through me. Many might believe It’s simple to be consumed that it’s quick and painless but I know the feeling. The sickening feeling of being devoured and consumed by the righteous, But come to think of it, I preferred the darkness more.

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Hiya Sharma

Date: 10/24/2023 3:20:00 AM

Sigh, unfortunately I can resonate with that feeling of being 'consumed ' too.. Which devours one's every sense.. Leaving us lifeless.. It's very painstaking and vulnerable.. Your words actually make the readers feel those particular emotions which you convey within such emotive phraseology and wordplay.. Truly a very palpable write..

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 10/23/2023 5:01:00 AM

Hannah, your poem "Consumed" is a powerful and evocative exploration of pain and suffering. The imagery is visceral and disturbing, and the tone is raw and emotional. I especially appreciate the way you use the metaphor of being "consumed" to convey the feeling of being overwhelmed by pain.

Hannah Cherry
Date: 10/23/2023 6:47:00 AM

Thank you Daniel!