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Life is seldom fair no one's keen to share; everyone is for themselves. Love changes our heart the moment we start to think outside of ourselves. Good guys finish last; that die has been cast in stone by a creed of greed. But random kind acts create chips and cracks, that hold humanity's seed. We believe we're souls playing out our roles in the theater of life. And yet, we curse death with our final breath, exalting both gun and knife. We don't feel evil nor seek upheaval, but we're certainly not Saints. Bordering contempt, we think we're exempt from life's conflicting constraints.

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Date: 8/15/2018 11:39:00 AM
So true...Yet, random kind acts open little cracks to plant humanity's seed. Do people take the time to think carefully! I just rewatched Sergeant York. With thoughtfulness he contemplated his place in WWI. Blessings, dear friend!
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Emile Pinet
Date: 8/15/2018 11:59:00 AM
Thanks Kim, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 8/15/2018 8:34:00 AM
Well done, Emile. Strong message.
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Date: 8/15/2018 9:36:00 AM
Thanks Line, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.

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