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Life is rarely fair: folks aren't keen to share; thinking only of themselves. We could change that part: if we'd merely start thinking outside of ourselves. Good guys finish last; a perspective cast in stone, by a creed of greed. But random kind acts create little cracks; to sow humanity's seed. We believe we're souls playing mortal roles; rehearsed on the stage of life. And yet, we woo Death, up to our last breath; exalting both gun and knife. Most don't tout evil, nor seek upheaval: but we're certainly not Saints. When wealth and lust tempt: many feel exempt from moral-imposed constraints.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 8/15/2018 11:39:00 AM
So true...Yet, random kind acts open little cracks to plant humanity's seed. Do people take the time to think carefully! I just rewatched Sergeant York. With thoughtfulness he contemplated his place in WWI. Blessings, dear friend!
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Date: 8/15/2018 11:59:00 AM
Thanks Kim, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 8/15/2018 8:34:00 AM
Well done, Emile. Strong message.
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Date: 8/15/2018 9:36:00 AM
Thanks Line, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.

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