Constantly Chipping Away

constantly chipping away— seventeen years of weathering arguments, differences, rebukes and then reconciliations I gave in some, you gave up some for the smiles in each other’s eyes opinions, values that we once held tight we let go reluctantly but gradually to make us work, to keep the promise alive erosion of personalities over years no wins , no losses just tiny little pieces of you and tiny little pieces of me lost forever to make us whole Written on:09/16/2016 Contest:All the little pieces
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La France Avatar
September 24, 2016 at 10:44 AM
Sara, congratulations on your placement in my contest ~
Gupta Avatar
September 17, 2016 at 6:48 AM
Nice poetic treatment of the contest theme ... lovely and artistic ...
Chansarkar Avatar
September 22, 2016 at 8:47 AM
Thanks Probir, appreciate your comment!
Turner Avatar
September 16, 2016 at 1:58 PM
Sara, this is really a great entry to the contest. You have described what it takes to make a relationship work, perfectly. Good luck in contest!
Chansarkar Avatar
September 22, 2016 at 8:45 AM
Yes, it takes chipping away!
Allison Avatar
September 16, 2016 at 11:22 AM
We all have good times and bad times in relationships but need to weather the storm and work at it - great poem Sara:-) hugs Jan xx
Chansarkar Avatar
September 22, 2016 at 8:44 AM
Thanks Jan, yes you are right!
Smith Avatar
September 16, 2016 at 10:43 AM
Lovely Sara....there is a need for give and take
Chansarkar Avatar
September 22, 2016 at 8:44 AM
Thanks Tim:)
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