Constant As the Moon

I am Prometheus on the rock.
Your eyes are constant as the moon,
Winter streets I never wandered,
Pristine lakes when swans have flown.

Your eyes are constant as the moon,
The swans have nested at your eyes,
Frozen lakes where amulets like lilies float,
Black and bottomless in onyx guise.

Winter streets I never wandered,
Azure lanes conveying swans into the night,
Frozen moon shine for me the rock, my heart,
Your eyes are constant in my sight.

Pristine lakes when swans have flown,
Placid down of winter streets
When moons like lilies black in onyx guise,
Implore as amulets when glances meet.

I am Prometheus on the rock.
Your eyes are constant as the moon,
Winter streets I never wandered,
Pristine lakes when swans have flown.


7th Place
Best Romantic Write May-July 2017
Sponsor:  John Hamilton
Posted 5/1/17
Today's date:  7/25/17
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Barden Avatar
July 29, 2017 at 5:26 PM
Charming and exquisite ... wonderful write, Dale, and well-deserved placement ... congrats, my friend! Love it!
Kimathi Avatar
July 28, 2017 at 6:13 AM
A fine piece indeed! Congrats Dale, for your WIN in the contest! ;-)
Cozart Avatar
July 28, 2017 at 8:48 AM
Thanks, Teddy.
Allison Avatar
July 28, 2017 at 2:26 AM
many congrats on your win Dale I love the rhyme and the impact of the repeated lines especially love the swans line:-) hugs Jan xx
Cozart Avatar
July 28, 2017 at 8:48 AM
Thanks so much, Jan!
Marcum Wong Avatar
July 27, 2017 at 10:56 PM
This poem is really lovely Dale! Congratulations on your high placement!
Cozart Avatar
July 28, 2017 at 8:48 AM
Thanks, Connie.
Wood Avatar
July 27, 2017 at 11:15 AM
". . . black in onyx guise" What a terrific rhyme Dale. Congratulations on placement with this interesting poem. I have save this one. - Dean
Cozart Avatar
July 27, 2017 at 11:18 AM
Thanks very much, Dean!
Hamilton Avatar
July 27, 2017 at 9:23 AM
Wonderful write Dale, congrats on a fine placement in this difficult to judge contest!
Cozart Avatar
July 27, 2017 at 9:25 AM
Thanks very much, John! I appreciate your acknowledgement.
Zaan Avatar
July 23, 2017 at 7:43 AM
Yeah, I've seen your work before on here. Your work is amazing.
Cozart Avatar
July 23, 2017 at 8:11 AM
Thank you very much, Akua.
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