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Conserving Veiled Walls

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Weary from long and tiring quests. A foul expression seeps like a pest. Unwillingness to accept being ignored. Do you give up or avoid looking forward? A sturdy base from which to expand These broken walls are pretty stand This continued to stand for the test of time. Many tales, only God can count, and sublime The walls wound them deep inside. Similar to the rest of the survivors tied. On Earth, the best place in the universe. Hear the tales of love, hate, pain, and a curse.
Written: November 17, 2022

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Date: 11/18/2022 4:34:00 PM
I like the message in your Couplets, Lasaad. "Unwillingness to accept being ignored. Do you give up or avoid looking forward?" Great question. Easier to give up looking forward than to give up looking forward because others are ignoring. Take care of yourself my friend. Bill
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Date: 11/18/2022 5:05:00 AM
Remnants past can haunt over time. Your poem made me pause and think, Lasaad. Quests don't always succeed.
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Date: 11/18/2022 1:09:00 AM
Quite controversial verse.
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