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Conservatory

Such dusty mats of coconut, and hats, and wicker chairs that creak; and chats, and cats on sills that suck the early sun that spills through glass to pass into the frills and twills that talk and twitter, pass the time till tiffin, pass the time of day this way until the chills of morning pass, and cups and saucers clink and find the sink. The daily round’s begun and yarns are spun in sun and shade until the fading light brings night; and glass that’s black as peat reflects the hats and cats upon themselves while vats of black-tar dark and bats are kept outside. And clinks announce the hour for drinks.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 9/27/2022 11:34:00 AM
Andrew, thanks for suggesting this poem. The internal rhymes are great and I like your use of alliteration. I love the cats sucking up the sun light. I’ve had cats, that’s just what they do. John
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Date: 12/22/2021 8:24:00 AM
Dear Andrew, I am enraptured with this poem. Everything about it, the thrilling rhythm, enchanting rhymes, the ambiance within your creative lines, your flair and artistry that gives this piece its vibrant life, brings me to the center of a day at the Conservatory, a place of fascination charming my heart's imagination. Exquisite and a fav! Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Date: 2/9/2022 2:37:00 AM
Thank you so much, Susan, for this later comment (and thanks to all who have left comments, too). I'm pleased someone had read "Conservatory" at this late stage (I wrote it some 15, maybe more, years ago).
Date: 7/7/2013 10:26:00 AM
Thanks, everyone, for lovely comments. This poem's been up for several months now, and it's ages since it became a feature poem. I'm glad it's still generating some interest.
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Date: 7/7/2013 10:19:00 AM
A great Free -for-all winning poem. *CONGRATULATIONS!!! With your awesome winning write. have a great day, TA TA TA * Linda
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Date: 7/3/2013 11:55:00 PM
Andrew, very nice........... skat
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Date: 7/3/2013 6:47:00 PM
Andrew I truly love this form of poetry. A delightful read. Welcome to PS. This poem I've put on my favorite list. Congratulations on your win. Warm Smiles, Connie
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Date: 12/14/2012 5:32:00 PM
Andrew,, Congratulation, with your featured poem of the week, have yourself a great day inspired by "YOU!" wishing you the best holidays 2 come ;-) always ~PD
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Andrew John
Date: 12/15/2012 3:17:00 AM
And best for Christmas to you, too. Many thanks.
Date: 12/4/2012 12:43:00 PM
Andrew, , stopping by 2 welcome U into the soup. First I will start by reading your free verse poem. Good verse if you ask me. Wishing you the best success with your poetry. ~SKAT~
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Andrew John
Date: 12/6/2012 2:50:00 AM
Thanks for kind words. Will be looking in a lotsa people's stuff over the weeks, and hope to leave comments.

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