Richard Palmer Poet Rhyme

Conscious Thoughts

My mind is overloading, so much thoughts to digest,
My mind is downloading, so much thoughts to express,
Thoughts with emotions, my heart rate beating faster 
behind the muscles of my chest,
Thoughts of repairing Mother Earth, let's mend or get 
her a new dress,
Thoughts of a world of love and peace, hate and anger 
on recess,
Thoughts of mankind uniting, putting division to rest,
Thoughts of no more bad governance, citizens distress,
Thoughts of us coming together, crime and violence let's 
fix this mess,
A conscious thought, of every single one of us, trying to 
do our very best...

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Sally Eslinger January 19, 2022 at 5:14 AM Richard, I sincerely like your mind holding here thoughts and your pen for so effectively setting such thoughts into a powerful, flowing, well written poem! I would add: that words regain the power due them as God so created them to have. Have a blessed day. Richard Palmer January 21, 2022 at 6:14 AM thank you Sally, your comment made my day

Tom Cunningham December 13, 2021 at 1:26 PM I share your thoughts Richard, we can only but hope one day it will become a reality. It would be heaven on earth. Tom Richard Palmer January 9, 2022 at 7:13 AM Yes it would Tom, hopeful is the word, thanks for dropping by

Karen Jones December 13, 2021 at 1:00 PM As I read this it brought to mind Marvin Gay's music. I like the energy this inspires. Great write and if we all could be more inspired to repair Mother Earth this is the greatest gift to our heirs we can leave. Richard Palmer January 9, 2022 at 7:18 AM yes it would be Karen, but the mindset of mankind right now, it's gonna take a drastic changes, might be up to our heirs to fix it