Conscious Gems

Conscious Beings



                     She sensed the grass has instinctively grown

                     Taller than the aged stone motionless and alone

                     Deep green like the emerald set on her golden ring

                     Like cognizant beings nourished by a life-giving spring.









10/19/2022: Aboard cruise ship:
                   Rhapsody of the Seas
                   Docked in Haifa, Israel

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Date: 11/17/2022 7:41:00 PM
The green grass growing is being beautifully compared to the emerald set in a golden ring. The tall growing grass is projected against the motionless stone. Thus growth and stagnation are powerfully contrasted. Great Quatrain, Anselmo
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Date: 11/18/2022 3:36:00 PM
As always, thanks so much Valsa for commenting, and sharing your very intelligent perspective!...ab
Date: 10/20/2022 4:14:00 PM
Anselmo, Your writing is fairly flawless, and the content shows that you have a deep understanding of the topic at hand. How adorable is it that a poem that really should have been called a Gem?
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Date: 10/22/2022 7:00:00 AM
I am truly humbled by your very inspiring and heartwarming remarks Lasaad! Thank you so much. I have not been writing as often as I used to but hoping to get back on the saddle soon. I need to read more of your awesome poems. Take care!...ab
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